Soul to Soul
A Poem by MomzillaNC
 for Hamid on Valentine’s Day 2014
Soul to Soul
Soul and soul alone, divided by ocean’s brine…
Looked up and wondered on one shining star…
A wish, a hope made for love to find…
Two faces do lonely sadness mar.
Years wend on, without love’s rhyme…
Heart and heart from each other so far…
No song they find in rhythm and time…
Another’s heart beat can only jar.
Earth turns, on marches time…
Life’s tragedies both hearts scar…
Hope fades as love shows no sign…
Forgotten -- the wish upon that star.
Two souls untied across all time…
Drawn together from places far…
Through many obstacles, yours and mine…
The miracle of us written ‘pon a star.
Soul to soul for each other we shine…
We found each other and made a start…
Before God our union we made divine…
Two souls embraced one united heart. by D. Denise Dianaty
© 2023 MomzillaNC
Featured Review
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Your husband is, one very lucky person, to have found you, Momzilla. I wish, one day, to find someone, like you did. This is a beautiful tribute to your love and the relationship, you two, have grown over the years. Thank you, for sharing this romantic poem.
You have, in your 3rd stanza, an open ", with no end ".
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you. I hope you find that too. And thanks for catching that hanging quote, it was actually a d.. read moreThank you. I hope you find that too. And thanks for catching that hanging quote, it was actually a dash in my word processor. The WC composer window always does that with dashes for some reason.
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9 Years Ago
Your welcome, Momzilla. One of those wonderful glitches that makes the WC, so unique.
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9 Years Ago
IKR?!
Hey, be sure to enter my first contest -- Make Us Laugh.
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9 Years Ago
Don't have anything that's humorous, Momzilla.
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9 Years Ago
It's a chance to stretch yourself. Laughter is the one infectious thing everyone wants to catch!
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9 Years Ago
Sigh. We'll see. If I do have anything funny, its laced with heavy sarcasm.
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9 Years Ago
Funny is funny.
Period.
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9 Years Ago
Not sure, my black humour will past your test.
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9 Years Ago
Are you kidding? Some of the best humor is black humor!
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9 Years Ago
Besides, it's open voting.
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9 Years Ago
Not promising anything, Momzilla. It has to feel right to me, before I will post or enter your conte.. read moreNot promising anything, Momzilla. It has to feel right to me, before I will post or enter your contest.
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9 Years Ago
Cool. I hope you will, though.
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Your husband is, one very lucky person, to have found you, Momzilla. I wish, one day, to find someone, like you did. This is a beautiful tribute to your love and the relationship, you two, have grown over the years. Thank you, for sharing this romantic poem.
You have, in your 3rd stanza, an open ", with no end ".
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you. I hope you find that too. And thanks for catching that hanging quote, it was actually a d.. read moreThank you. I hope you find that too. And thanks for catching that hanging quote, it was actually a dash in my word processor. The WC composer window always does that with dashes for some reason.
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9 Years Ago
Your welcome, Momzilla. One of those wonderful glitches that makes the WC, so unique.
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9 Years Ago
IKR?!
Hey, be sure to enter my first contest -- Make Us Laugh.
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9 Years Ago
Don't have anything that's humorous, Momzilla.
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9 Years Ago
It's a chance to stretch yourself. Laughter is the one infectious thing everyone wants to catch!
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9 Years Ago
Sigh. We'll see. If I do have anything funny, its laced with heavy sarcasm.
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9 Years Ago
Funny is funny.
Period.
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9 Years Ago
Not sure, my black humour will past your test.
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9 Years Ago
Are you kidding? Some of the best humor is black humor!
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9 Years Ago
Besides, it's open voting.
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9 Years Ago
Not promising anything, Momzilla. It has to feel right to me, before I will post or enter your conte.. read moreNot promising anything, Momzilla. It has to feel right to me, before I will post or enter your contest.
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9 Years Ago
Cool. I hope you will, though.
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Words thread and stitched with love to form a fabric story of two soul mates. Beautiful and touching. Nicely woven :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
It's the story of my husband and myself. This December will be 23 years and each year finds us more .. read moreIt's the story of my husband and myself. This December will be 23 years and each year finds us more in love. It means so much that others find it beautiful and touching. Thank you so much.
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9 Years Ago
Wow! 23! That is awesome I hope you will have many more years together :D You are welcome.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you. I've already composed my vows for our 25th renewal. They're posted here too under the tit.. read moreThank you. I've already composed my vows for our 25th renewal. They're posted here too under the title, "Vows."
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A lovely, romantic verse.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you. It's the story of "Us," of my husband and me.
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Added on August 20, 2014
Last Updated on February 17, 2023
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