My dearest father

My dearest father

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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I love my father more than anyone else.

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MY DEAREST FATHER 
I have written several things for my mother,
I equally admire and love you more than her father.
I am not afraid to unveil my past,
Oh! Father your place in my heart is vast.
I had no mother since years,
She left me and I was in tears.
You were the one who took care of me father,
You turned all my tears to laughter.
Every night I woke you up,
But you never said anything to me.
Every day I created fuss,
But you bared all my tantrums with ease.
No one can take that place you have in my heart.
I have loved you since the very start.
I cannot imagine being away from you,
I have not loved anyone else more than you.
I lack words to say what all you have ever done for me,
You were my mother too,
You took care of me like she would do.
But she was not with me,
You have filled her love by loving me from her side too.
I always want to see you happy,
No one can ever do what you have done for me,
You are the best in the world,
You are best in whole history.
I am sorry for every pain I have caused you,
I am in tears father,
I cannot imagine losing you.

© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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Well done!...It's really very beautiful

Posted 1 Week Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Week Ago

Thank you very much.
Najam you're father must be way far more proud of you as you're for him! My each word will stand less to explain that yes, "Your father cares and loves you more than anybody existing in the world"
Had tears in my eyes while reading it!
Almighty bless you sister and your beloved father.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for such kindest words. He doesn't know that I have written this because I haven't.. read more
This poem in particular reminds me of a song I wrote for my father (it's rather embarrassing when I look back on it now). But the love you feel is untarnished, and I hope it remains this way.

As always, thank you for supporting my competitions!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

I thank you for creating them, thank you so much for reading this as well.
This was great, well said, I too love my father.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much :)
It's a beautiful thing, the love between a parent and a child and there is nothing else that can compare to it. I can tell that you really love your father and he must feel so blessed to have a daughter who loves him so much.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Ah, yes. Thank you very much Avia. I am extremely happy to know that you liked this. 😀
Avia

4 Months Ago

Definitely. You're always welcome. By the way, congratulations on being 2nd the short story contes.. read more
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

How kind of you, thank you very much :)
This is very good. Very touching and very deep. I have the same feeling as you towards your father.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much sir. I appreciate your kind words.
tarah morris

4 Months Ago

Im actually a girl the man in the photo is my father but your welcome
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I am so sorry.
Thank you again.
Wowwie! I really like this.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

You remind me of a person. Thank you very much for reading, I appreciate it a lot.
I love this piece.. it is warm... honest and emotional too... well written... feels delightful to read.. your dad must be proud of you writing such a lovely poem...
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

Actually he doesn't know that I have written this.
Thank you so much for reading, I am reall.. read more
Misty

9 Months Ago

yep, i loved it... i request u, plz read this out to him. I'm sure u will have tears if u r emotiona.. read more
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

When the time comes I will surely show him this and yes I am very emotional and so is he.
Love the honest lines here, and this in particular got me so emotional: "I am in tears father,
I cannot imagine losing you,"

Thank you for submitting for the inspiration contest!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

I thank you so much for reading it. :)
This poem feels very similar to a situation I am in.(exept the other way around mother not father) I feel I need to express my love for my mother more than ever. Thank you

Posted 10 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

10 Months Ago

Oh I understand....Thank you for your time to read my poem...I appreciate it :)
Ellie Qtz

10 Months Ago

It was amazing!

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Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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