Fish bowl

FISH BOWL

O' beauty of my bowl,

Do you like living there?

O' you tiny soul,

If you don't want to stay; break away.

 

O' little fish gliding in exuberance,

How do you live happily?

O' small life of innocence,

Teach me your way.

O' fragile fish, you capture my attention, 

Doesn't your beauty fade away?

O' fish of my admiration,

There is nothing less about you to say.

O' joyful soul; mini delight, 

Why are you going away?

O' pleasure of my sight,

Guide me thy way. 

Reviews

[wordman]

the life of a fish in it`s bowl,great idea for a poem,and i liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

I am overwhelmed to hear that, thank you very much it means a lot.

[lostinthewaves]

I really liked this poem, and I feel like it is a little different from your usual. Keep up the good work my friend

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure, thank you very much for reading. Good to know that you liked it. ☺

[heartspeaks]

Firstly super aptness.. not too short not too long. I like the way it personifies life. Poetically it's to the point and best part is you tried something out of the box...and it came out so good. Choice of words is so nice.. I like the comparisons.. All in all it was a really great read and moreover mind tangled... Keep up the good work.. really appreciative... Good luck ❤️

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much, I am glad that I was able to write such and it turned out to be good, really feeling overwhelmed to see that this poem is receiving likeness. Thank you very much, I mean it :)

[heartspeaks]

My pleasure

[Abraham George]

i like the new version/view of your life.

Before you were a fish in a bowl( Love) and now you break that bowl and came out. you compare yourself to a fish in a bowl . I really like the way you describe the fish and bowl.

nice poem like all others

[Najam Us Saher]

You took the meaning and my thoughts to next level. Thank you so much for reading, it means a lot. ☺

[Abraham George]

I feel you wrote this poem from my point of view

[Najam Us Saher]

After a long time I managed to write something different which does not express my emotions or relates with my life.

[Abraham George]

Really its not really related to your life?

[Najam Us Saher]

No.
No metaphors, no hidden meaning in this poem.

[Abraham George]

But please think from my view. that Fish was you in Bowl of Love. you live there in that Bowl and i am telling you if you don't like break it

[Najam Us Saher]

That's a very good interpretation of this poem. I really like it.

[Mavericks]

Oh, my. What a lovely Piece. It brought some good memories from the Past. Had an aquarium where i used to watch them swimming around. I think we can learn from these lovely creatures. They go with the flow never complaining about anything. Faith. Believing in higher Power without judging anything in this vast creation. Just be the silent observer and let it be. The very reason i love Pisces Sign. Empathetic people of the Zodiac!

[Najam Us Saher]

I am extremely happy that this poem was relatable and it brought some good memories. ☺
Thank you so much for such kind words, I agree with you.

[Giulia King]

This poem is so different from the rest. The fact that you took a small thing and wrote about it in such a beautiful way, amazes me. Well done :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much for reading, I appreciate it.
Good to see you after a long time, hope you are happy and fine. 😀