All over again

ALL OVER AGAIN 

Another time, another heartbreak;

I feel I deserve it all.

I chose to be with you for your sake,

You made me up, you brought me to a fall.

You simply vanished from my life,

You rose me up, you broke me down.

Across the fields, like a river

I wanted to stay with you forever.

You sank me down, drowned me till I shivered.

It feels so cold; I've to be bold

Till I recover. 

All over it happened,

All over yet again.

You showed me life,

A perfect one, with you and me together.

You brought a smile, left me to feel pain forever.

My nature all sulky, my life so sombre,

You made me believe I was good

Then you decided to leave

I feel so high in pain,

My head is up in shame

Knowing I was foolish again.

I feel deceived by my deeds,

Which I thought it wouldn't be forgotten.

You built me up, you broke me down 

Like I was a playing tower. 

Across the seas, like a gentle breeze,

I wanted to stay with you forever.

Held by the things you told me,

Broken down by your audacity,

For me, you were the one,

Whom I trusted with my life,

Never knew you would let me down,

When I felt like a flying kite. 

Reviews

[SZHZIA]

A nice love poem which appreciates the role of a person in the life of poet. The poem also highlights his/her emotional association with that person. Thanks for sharing.... :-)

[Najam Us Saher]

Exactly! Thank you very much for sharing your views on this one.

[SZHZIA]

You are welcome... as always..

[MaximumFlight]

Bad things will happen to people no matter what. I think of it as no matter what happens, as long as you get back up, you'll be okay. I try to keep in mind that people will hurt me or let me down, I don't know who, why, or when, but I know I'll have to get back up and keep going and find someone who you can trust and there will be that one person in your life. I loved this piece :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Wise words, I agree with you. Thank you very much for sharing your views and reading it, it truly means a lot :)

[Giulia King]

Remember, everything that you do in this life, every choice, every promise has it's on consequence. Everything has a meaning.
Reading this poem made me think that you should be happy that it happened, that this relationship had an impact on your life. Use the negative things and turn them into something beautiful. Keep writing :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Your words are very encouraging. I totally agree with you. I feel so because when I finally found the person I love and when he loves me a lot, my parents doesn't want us to be together.
Thank you so much for such consoling words, they will stay with me forever, I will remember them :)

[heartspeaks]

whoaaaa..... this is superb... even the ones who havent suffered can feel the pain... keep up the good work

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. Good to see you :D

[Khazima Zainab]

Heart touching .Your words are always so real .

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much. Good to know that you liked it.

[not your muse]

When someone gives us high hopes and then takes it back, we feel overwhelmingly sad. Motioning on the same cycle again and again brings drastic pang. But life goes on. And we have to start all over again just for the sake of living.

[Najam Us Saher]

Absolutely correct. Thank you very much for reading and understanding the emotions behind this.

[Suhd]

The imagery is most likable in this poem ! Good job

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[Joey Nizz]

You have really have captured true emotions in this one, sometimes you can really feel what the writer is going through by just reading the words written.
Betrayal and heartbreaks are something bigger than anyone thinks until they go through it.

I loved your writing it was very real and made me feel what was going on in them.

Thanks for sharing Najam.

[Najam Us Saher]

I thank you very much for reading. You are absolutely right, one cannot really understand the pain of heartbreak unless they suffer.
Thank you, your words mean a lot :)

[Joey Nizz]

Your very much welcome ^^

[wordman]

betrayal is very painful,once loved then not

[Najam Us Saher]

You are absolutely right sir. Better not to be loved than betrayed.

[Anjali]

Such a deep and beautiful poetry it is! Simply loved it, like always. You never disappoint...😂. Keep on surprising us!

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah I will, thank you very much 😀

[Anjali]

You are very welcome!!