Thunder

Thunder

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

THUNDER
The lightning struck;
Terror spread
All over the city.
The rage of the cloud 
Broken by the thunder storm.
Flashes and cracks of light depicts
A complete broken sky.


 

© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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Even tho your poem is a vivid description of a weather-related thunderstorm, I found myself also thinking of it as a perfect metaphor to describe the curse of terrorism (especially due to line #2) when it shatters a community. I love watching lightning & waiting for the thunder quickly afterwards (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I sincerely thank you for reading my poem. It really means a lot to hear such kind words from you :)
Nice short poem. Very descriptive. Great.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this.
A situation described in very limited amount of words but very beautifully. I liked it

Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much. It means a lot.
Raas

3 Months Ago

You're very welcome
That last line reads like an interesting metaphor to me. Guess we all are, complete but broken skies in our own worlds... Nice write. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Absolutely, it can be interpreted in as many ways as possible. Thank you very much :D
Dr YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

You're welcome. A pleasure reading 😊
Presented well.....Loved it

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much :)
Very well presented..loved it

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this.
nice way of presentation.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much :)
Short and beautiful. Very nice.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much :)
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Zoe
Cracking poem! Loved it, especially the last line.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading :)
Zoe

5 Months Ago

You're welcome
I love that this can have so many adaptations in a readers mind, a true hallmark of a great poem!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

I am glad to hear such positive words, thank you very much.

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Added on December 15, 2017
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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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