Thunder

Thunder

A Poem by Najam Us Saher

THUNDER
The lightning struck;
Terror spread
All over the city.
The rage of the cloud 
Broken by the thunder storm.
Flashes and cracks of light depicts
A complete broken sky.


 

© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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Wonderful use of words . You made the reader believe and see the words written. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

I am happy that my words made you feel such. Thank you so much :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

It did and you are welcome my friend.
Even tho your poem is a vivid description of a weather-related thunderstorm, I found myself also thinking of it as a perfect metaphor to describe the curse of terrorism (especially due to line #2) when it shatters a community. I love watching lightning & waiting for the thunder quickly afterwards (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 12 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

12 Months Ago

I sincerely thank you for reading my poem. It really means a lot to hear such kind words from you :)
Nice short poem. Very descriptive. Great.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

12 Months Ago

Thank you very much for taking the time to read this.
A situation described in very limited amount of words but very beautifully. I liked it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much. It means a lot.
Rasheeq Taheer

11 Months Ago

You're very welcome
That last line reads like an interesting metaphor to me. Guess we all are, complete but broken skies in our own worlds... Nice write. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Absolutely, it can be interpreted in as many ways as possible. Thank you very much :D
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

You're welcome. A pleasure reading 😊
Presented well.....Loved it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

I am glad that you liked it. Thank you so much :)
Very well presented..loved it

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this.
nice way of presentation.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much :)
Short and beautiful. Very nice.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much :)
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Zoe
Cracking poem! Loved it, especially the last line.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading :)
Zoe

1 Year Ago

You're welcome

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Added on December 15, 2017
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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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