Just About Had Enough

Just About Had Enough

A Poem by Neville Pettitt
"

Down down, deeper & down...

"

Just About Had Enough

 

I

Lost

 Count

Of

 The

 Times

 

I

 Threatened

 To

 Leave

Her

 

Until

 She

 Finally

 Called

 My

 Bluff

 

Hey

 Babe

She

Eventually

Said

 

 You

 Can

 Go

 Now

If

You

Choose

 

I

 Have

 Just

 About

 Had

 Enough

 

 


© 2017 Neville Pettitt



Author's Note

Neville Pettitt
Straight down the line, as straight as a dye

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The boy who cried wolf too many times. He was finally left to his own demise. I’m hoping this ended a bit better! Love the stark and straight form as well as the turnaround at the end. Well-done!

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

4 Days Ago

Thank you Annette, much appreciated
Singularly aligned to " the biter bit" :-)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

1 Week Ago

Cheers Norman...
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BBP
That's the thing with threats isnt it? You have to eventually be willing to live them out.

Great little write.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

My kind of woman, maybe. Bless ya BBP I sincerely appreciate your time & of course your opinion reg.. read more
BBP

2 Weeks Ago

OF course...thanks for the read! :)
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Phew, I gotta stop for a moment, I need to reciprocate, erm I'm assuming that's the right word. Chee.. read more
Bloody women and their sixth sense.
I could say you'll need to be more canny in your thoughts. But she'll still know.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Cheers, does that mean you like it, or what?
Paul Bell

2 Weeks Ago

Brill. Up my street.
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Then I am repleat, cheers.....N
I love this poem and found it so amusing too. People who say it, don't ever really leave. They're too loving, so its always "Just about enough" but never completely so. To me this poem speaks of a deep love. Aprreciated so much!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Perception, or the interpretation of stimulus received via the senses, is indeed a remarkable thing... read more
DIVYA

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you dear friend.
so pack them bags,greyhound await`s you

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

Well thank you for pointing me in the right direction
 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

my pleasure !

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Neville Pettitt
Neville Pettitt

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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