S.W.A.K.

S.W.A.K.

A Poem by Chaos Complex

I want to dedicate my life to you-

Slow time when you’re happy;

Fast forward through the hardships,

And replay all the beautiful moments.

You’re a captivating mystery that I want to explore;

Invigorating: like foreign beach shores.

Can you be my core?

The very center of my universe?

I promise to love you more than anything on this Earth.

And if we have a rainy day, I swear:

After the storm, those May flowers will be there.

I think you’re a queen,

Different from other girls who only have a passion for green.

Your spectrum is more vivid.

All shades of color:

You’re angel white,

Whose sight-

Is enough to purify a sinful mind.

Captivating; a gift of creation.

When we talk, I feel whole...

Can we have more unification?

Romantic integration for paradise-like sensations?

You feel like summer tropics: so relaxin.

The word “gorgeous” doesn’t do you justice by even a fraction.

That’s where I come in,

To be a man of action:

Giving such a girl my all allows me to attain true satisfaction.

Our chemistry has to be right,

Can’t you feel it in your reactions,

When we clasp hands?

And all I’m asking is for a chance-

To  give you this:

All I need is your green light and mutual agreement,

And to plant one on these eager lips...

Then this love can be sealed with a kiss!


© 2010 Chaos Complex



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SWAK has a hint of courtly love thrown in but really aims for more of a heart & soul kind of love ... Findling that special one who really lights the torch isn't easy to find but using words like: "Your spectrum is more vivid. All shades of color: You’re angel white,Whose sight- Is enough to purify a sinful mind"
will definitely get U thru the door and beyond. Great opening & the title
ties the room together and make the end much more than a clique...
Thanx for sharing


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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SWAK has a hint of courtly love thrown in but really aims for more of a heart & soul kind of love ... Findling that special one who really lights the torch isn't easy to find but using words like: "Your spectrum is more vivid. All shades of color: You’re angel white,Whose sight- Is enough to purify a sinful mind"
will definitely get U thru the door and beyond. Great opening & the title
ties the room together and make the end much more than a clique...
Thanx for sharing


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was such a beautiful write, and you described everything so greatly. Very heartwarming, great piece :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful strate from the heart a wonderful read love it great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful! it's definitely a good read... this piece seems to have come straight from your heart... truly divine!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 15, 2010
Last Updated on January 17, 2010
Tags: love, kiss, hiphop, romance

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Chaos Complex
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I like to express my emotions and feelings in poetry. I write a lot of rap/hip hop stuff. I'm really vulgar. Deal with it. I don't get many reviews, but thank you to those who even bother to re.. more..

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