WHAT IS LIFE

WHAT IS LIFE

A Poem by Ov3R_sKiLl3D
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A poem which is pretty much true........

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WHAT IS LIFE

What is life,
life is a puzzle,

Sometime it’s tough,

Sometimes it’s simple…

Sometimes you find your way-

Sometimes you simply just lose… lose your way,

What is life?

Good?

Bad?

Sometimes you’re  wrong, and sometimes you’re  right,

What is life?

Some say it’s from birth to death,

So what’s between birth and death?

It is a choice,

Our life is just… just a matter of choices,

Live well and it will never go wrong.



© 2015 Ov3R_sKiLl3D



Author's Note

Ov3R_sKiLl3D
Hope you guys are gonna like this poem .... :)

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this is wonderful. such a great reminder.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This is another one I have trouble talking to you about, because not only did I work on it with you, but I already told you what I thought. XD I do think however, that this really shows how humans philosophize over things that we can't control, and how we are just a speck in time. But the way we spend our speck of time that has been allotted to us is our choice, and we should live it to the best we can. :)

"Live As If You're Gonna Die"
"In thᴉƧ wØrld wə lᴉv&.."

-Resilient
-Blade

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your review blade :)
The StoryTeller

2 Years Ago

No problem man, no problem. :)
I'm mesmerized to the core beautiful piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow! Reading this poem gave me a feeling of deja vu, coz I have written a similar poem just today-
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Life's Key

If DEATH is the ultimate destiny
One might sometime wonder
Why bother with birth
Suffer from living
And succumb to death

For LIFE- the Inbetween
It is as hard as it is easy
It is as easy as it is hard
The puzzle called Life
Answer is to find a key

The key to puzzle of life- YOU
The journey of your life
From birth to death
It is as good as you want it
It is as bad as you make it
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Everything put aside... I have enjoyed reading your poem! It is a great piece of work! Thanks for sharing it, Ov3R_sKiLl3D!😄☺

Posted 2 Years Ago


Benedict Mdluli

2 Years Ago

Wow!!! Wow I love this too big I feel like quitting school just to pursue poetry pliz stop writing .. read more
Lovely like always!
Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the review glad u liked it :)
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I really enjoyed the light and fresh air flowing down in this poem ,Beautiful write !

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

I am glad that you liked it :)
I love this poem, it reminds me of one I wrote when I first started my writing journey. An acrostic poem, I'll share it with you below, if you don't mind. Thanks for sharing this poem! Respectfully, blue angel

Life is full of paths not taken ~ find yours, and you won't be mistaken.
Over mountains we must climb ~ from the top, the view is divine.
Ventures into the abyss ~ has stumbling blocks, you shan't miss.
Every moment should be cherished ~ if you don't then you're careless.

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~Life is not a puzzle or game, but it's challenging
just the same. I hope you seize what's most important among these?

The choices you make can unravel at the seams. Yet, without these experiences, you really didn't follow your dreams!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thanks for tour review and i liked you poem it have the same meaning but a different way of describi.. read more
blue angel

2 Years Ago

Thanks. Yours is straight forward. I have tendency to go the long way around things. I truly enjoyed.. read more
With your simple words you've summed up the mystery of life..good write! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for your review i am glad that you liked it .... :)
Life is life....la la la...Opus!

Enjoyed the read, keep writing my friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for your review....... i am really glad that you liked it :)

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