Last Day of Our Lives (featuring Cool Girl)

Last Day of Our Lives (featuring Cool Girl)

A Poem by Not here

Dance..
It's party time..

Dance..
Dance..
Gonna have some fun tonight
Dance..

Follow my lead..

Here we go now, 
Down 
Bring it down to the ground
Now up to the sky
Don't beg or cry
Because 
We're gonna have some fun tonight
Cuz it's the last day of our lives

Hey
I see you eyeballing 
The man over there
And his chest is bare 
Girl
You're gonna dance with him tonight 
Cuz it's the last day of our lives

Spin spin
Scream and shout
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about 
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Tonight (2x)


Stop
Get out of my way
Can't you see
I'm partying
Come on
You're gonna move with us tonight
Cuz it's the last day of our lives

Oh!
Let's get in a line
Sway our hips
All in time 
To the music of this song tonight
Cuz it's the last day of our lives

Spin spin
Scream and shout
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Tonight (2x)

"Typical teens and tweens, all of those jeans.
Some are green and some are mean, but most of all genes
are running amok all around. They're making such a scene.
Think they're on the big screen? Thinking they're a prom queen?"
Trust me, I heard 'em talking, all around hawking
and just plain mocking us while we're rocking.
What's the point of walking? It's really quite shocking
and I'm just balking. Why not be flocking?
Why not be running? Why not be dancing?
If we're gonna die tonight, why not be prancing
around like a drama queen, maybe in pajamas green.
I'm an inverted con machine, but what does that and so on mean?
Does it even matter? Everyday I'm getting fatter
and looking like the Mad Hatter filling the air with my splatter
coming out from my mouth. Scatter it around like a large platter
of crazy concoctions from my brain on auction.
Trust me, I wouldn't cry if tonight was the night I die
and I never said goodbye. It's alright though because why
should we worry about what's coming? I'd rather just be humming
this song and giving some high fives
because it's the last day of our lives.

Spin spin
Scream and shout
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about 
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Tonight (2x)

© 2015 Not here


Author's Note

Not here
This is something me and Cool Girl worked together on, like forming our own two-person band :) Pretty fantastic. Also, since she wrote the bulk and best part of this, it was only appropriate to make the picture a girl

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Very nice flow of words. I did feel the song. Need some music to make the words come alive. Thank you Dante for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

thank you :) and cool girl did most of it
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This was a great collaboration! Really reminds me of school dances and summer parties. So fun!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

thanks :) im glad you enjoyed it
yvo miki

5 Years Ago

That's good😃😃😃😃
Loved it 😃😃😃😃😃😃cute!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

thanks :) cool girl did most of the work
yvo miki

5 Years Ago

Are y'all together
Not here

5 Years Ago

nah im single
That was awesome you guys. I see the different voices, but they merge well together. And this is indeed a very catchy song I would love for one day to be featured in all the big radio stations!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

well you can thank cool girl for the catchiness :)
Spin spin
Scream and shout
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Come on everyone
Let's twirl about
Tonight (2x)

Bravo (2x) - its a wonderful whimsical write you guys.
A real uplifter. Thanks for sharing. :))

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

thank you very well :)
This is amazing! I love the meaning:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

thanks glad you enjoyed it :)
This is an awesome collab... two talented writers and your creativity definitely shined through in the piece. Very good work :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

thank you alot :)
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I like the idea...if it truly is the day we die, why cry? Give each other a wicked glance, put on my parachute pants, go back in time and dance! Thank you for the giggles. take care...dan

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

man i want some parachute pants!!!
You guys did a wonderful job, it's cool, great flow, wonderful rhymes and I loved it. Also enjoyed the title and the theme held throughout. It's fun, thinking about the last day, you two really layed it out there. This has a large audience; very appealing & I thank you. I hope you two write more. Dale

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

me too dale :) thanks for reading and reviewing
Confuser

5 Years Ago

You're welcome!!!
I like it, its really like a rap, but I still enjoyed reading it. Well written, next you'll get together and become famous. Ha, if you do good luck.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not here

5 Years Ago

lol ill remember you if we do :)

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