A Vicious Cycle

A Vicious Cycle

A Poem by Passingdaze
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One that has been bouncing around...

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He knew he was meant to suffer.
To live his life a leper to those who left him far behind.
No one knew his name,
Nor did they care.
His eyes were stitched shut so he could sleep.
Thoughts entered his brain and left a messy residue,
He could not process them,he could not think.

Reason came and went with winter's cruel kiss.
He marched forward blind,a lost soul in a shameful world.
They did not understand him.
Their hearts were filled with contempt as they led him away.
He melted with the snow that spring,
Not even a memory to them.

His love went nowhere,
His soul forever lost.

© 2009 Passingdaze


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"winters cruel kiss" loove that. (: this is really good, and emotional.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job honey. once again you have managed to write a wonderful poem as always. :) It is very sad though, even the thought of anyone being meant to suffer is just sad. Anyone who lives long enough will be able to give and receive love. Some just get it later in life than others.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ooh wow that was really sad but amazing. Your imagery is wonderful
His eyes were stitched shut so he could sleep.
^thats my fave line.
Great job.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Passingdaze
Passingdaze

Blacksburg, VA



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I am 34 years old. I live in Southwest Virginia. I am a musician and I also love to write and read poetry. I especially enjoy strange and deeply personal writing. To my friends on this site: Please re.. more..

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