Eyes

Eyes

They show your true self

and the pain within your heart

and expose your soul

Reviews

[VITD]

Beautiful as always, another great poem.

[John McFadyen]

Thank you VITD

[Cord Moreski]

Beautiful :)

[John McFadyen]

Thank you Cord.

[X]

Nice haiku! Cool style and so dead-on with the description. Nice job

[John McFadyen]

Thanks muchly X

[Divya]

Eyes mirror your soul. You say it beautifully here!

[John McFadyen]

Hi Divya, hope you are good? Many thanks

[Kajal Gulabani]

True indeed.. John can u plz give me some tips on haiku n senyru... If u dnt mind. Thanks :)

[John McFadyen]

http://www.writerscafe.org/zainul this is the Master on WC. Thank you Kajal. Will send you some tips.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Eyes can indeed tell us the world about another's inner state of being....thanks

[John McFadyen]

Thanks Sheema (winks)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i don't trust anyone who can't look me in the eye directly.

that person has something to hide...i don't care what kind of a person someone is otherwise, if he or she can look me directly in the eye...i will be one person who will trust.

nice senyru here.

[John McFadyen]

Thank you Jacob!

[quinfinn]

we have all heard the expression "windows to the soul"....hogwash! some people are best at deceiving with their eyes....i have met them. but there is a moment in time when two people are looking into each others eyes and can really "see" the heart at work, and you have captured those moments herein....wonderful!

[John McFadyen]

Karina's eyes. Thank you Quin!

[Frieda P]

Yes, the eyes have it, they're on fire when it comes to truth. Nice one.

[John McFadyen]

Thank you poet

[Leslie Philibert]

Sometimes !

[John McFadyen]

Heritic!