Now She Can Cry

Now She Can Cry

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

Thanksgiving come and gone
no one else seemed to notice the empty chair
she was tempted to put a place setting there
but she didn't

And when she felt the tears welling
within her weary blue eyes
she bit her tongue

Gifts bought, wrapped placed beneath
the tree
those Christmas lights seemed to mock her
those that burned brightly but suddenly faded
just like...

She wanted to smash that tree
stomp those gifts. rip those twinkling lights
from those branches
scream at the top of her lungs
but she didn't

And when she felt those tears welt
she squeezed her eyes so tightly closed
everything stayed black for a moment when she opened them -
bit her tongue till she tasted blood -

Fireworks, champagne, a toast to the old
a toast to the new
smiling faces, kisses all around

She wanted to, could have dampened those fireworks
salted the champagne with her pent up tears
tore those kisses from lips with her nails
but she didn't

New Years Day -
Christmas turkey gone
only a carcass
one lone piece of soggy pumpkin pie
tree down
people resting

She sits in the bedroom that smells so familiar
still after all this time
from the velvet box,
takes out the lock of hair

Touches gently
smells, feels, holds to her heart
memories wash over her weary body

She lays her head on the pillow
where she last lay
tears flow like rapids
unsung screams burn her throat
tears soak the pillow

Now ...she can cry

© 2011 Chloe..Across the Universe

Author's Note

Chloe..Across the Universe
First holidays without loved ones .....
I wish you all a Happy New Year , will be around in awhile to read ...

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OH this was so sad. I so remember a time when I too felt like this. many a time went by while I sat by myself within a crowd and felt so alone. tears fell when the darkness came, and this described exactly what it felt like.. Your imagery was perfection, your words became mine.. Bravo!

Mags xx

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


this is off the hook very well written

Posted 2 Years Ago

This is a poem I that has a lot of what people are missing in their writing. It's personal, has a message and most of all, it has the little details that really bring it to life. A lot of people would have left this a lot more general. I loved that you gave images like "those Christmas lights seemed to mock her". It sets the scene and gets you inside the mind of the narrator. Good work.

Posted 2 Years Ago

I was thinking after reading this, should it be called 'Can she cry now?' as each stanza finishes as you wait for her to cry but she doesn't - until the end. Yet with the title you have given the ending away. Just a thought. It's nice to read your poems after popping in for a quick catch up. Hard hitting imagery and great work.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Are you back, Chlo? Have not heard from you in forever. Miss you! You are so the bomb!

Posted 2 Years Ago

hope this year is better
find something new!

Posted 2 Years Ago

i would like to say one word for this poem in SANSKRIT : "ADBHUTT" which does mean the great combination of "Incredible" + "Mesmeriing"+ "Heart Touching" + "Brilliant" + ...... Seriously awesome!!!! : I honour

Posted 2 Years Ago

This resonates for me.. I know how this feels.

Posted 3 Years Ago

That was the perfect show of what goes on inside us when we are so sad and holding it in. The imagery was so simple yet vibrant. I loved it. Truly amazing work, good job. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago

i thought it was written really good

Posted 3 Years Ago

Strong imagery evoking variety of emotions. Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago

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Added on January 1, 2011
Last Updated on January 24, 2011


Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR

Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..


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