It Stopped Raining

It Stopped Raining

A Poem by Pencil2Pad

What's wrong...
The question you can't answer
Lingering
Becoming an echo
Swirling in your head
Stirring up past memories
False explanations
Future misconceptions
Failing cognitions
What's wrong
What's wrong
What's wrong
Why are you crying
Baby Girl, Please Tell Me What's Wrong.....
It's raining out
Pouring
I can hear it falling fast
Hitting the pavement hard with every splash
Voices moaning, groaning, cursing
Aww S***
It's comforting
I can feel
I can think
I can be
Me
With every storm
The dark clouds
The running
The sound of water crashing
I breathe
Im no longer alone
The outside has become the reflection of my inner
It doesn't last long though
You know, before it lightens up
Before I have to cover up
Clean up
And put it all away...
I just want it to storm
I want to hear the rain
See the lighting
Feel the thunder
Watch the chaos
Why are you crying
Baby Girl, Please Tell Me What's Wrong.....
The sun is out...and
It stopped raining

© 2017 Pencil2Pad



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That is a pretty unusual way to regard the rain. Even though i think many could relate to this...after all the universe is fractal, so what's going inside is manifesting on the outside as well.

''See the lighting
Feel the thunder
Watch the chaos ''

loved these lines.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pencil2Pad

5 Months Ago

Thnx for your comment.



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I think as humans we spend so much time trying to build up a wall and put on a front. Sometimes you just need to get out how you're feeling, regardless of who's looking, or if it borders on a breakdown. It's the only way to stay sane. I definitely can relate to this poem, and it was a pleasure to read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pencil2Pad

5 Months Ago

Thnxx! I'm glad you liked it. I'm always shocked when someone actually likes my work.
Fanicia E

5 Months Ago

lol you shouldn't be, and you're very welcome
Pencil2Pad - With rain, thunder and lightning, we might think. Without it, we might cry. Sounds like a poet's lament and I liked it. Good work P2P. Namyh

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pencil2Pad

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much 😊 Namyh
That is a pretty unusual way to regard the rain. Even though i think many could relate to this...after all the universe is fractal, so what's going inside is manifesting on the outside as well.

''See the lighting
Feel the thunder
Watch the chaos ''

loved these lines.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pencil2Pad

5 Months Ago

Thnx for your comment.

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