Close Enough
A Poem by
Goat
A poem about messing up when nervous.
I feel queasy and my hands sweat, I like you a lot, even though we just met. You are so handsome, and I am so plain. When I see you I feel like I'll faint. I look into your eyes, ready to speak all of a sudden my knees feel weak. I open my mouth, thoughts race through my head. Oops, I kind of just slapped you instead. Close enough.
© 2014 Goat
Reviews
I love this! Nice and cute. I feel like most people can relate. I know I can.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Haha, thank you.
Everyone has been here, Goat. Still turn red, when I remember, the first time, I ask a girl out, in grade 8. Thank you, for treating this, with the right touch of humour, to poem.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Everyone has been here, Goat. Still turn red, when I remember, the first time, I ask a girl out, in grade 8. Thank you, for treating this, with the right touch of humour, to poem.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to read this.
10 Years Ago
Your welcome.
This is so true! Your wording is just right!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is so true! Your wording is just right!!
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much!
This poem was cleverly worded : )
Posted 10 Years Ago
This poem was cleverly worded : )
A short--but cute poem!
Too funny.
Thanks for sharing.
Posted 10 Years Ago
A short--but cute poem!
Too funny.
Thanks for sharing.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
10 Years Ago
I did! Thanks for sharing.
This is cute but also refreshingly honest. It was easy to read and I had a smile on my face the whole time.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is cute but also refreshingly honest. It was easy to read and I had a smile on my face the whole time.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing it. I'm glad I could make you smile.
Cute. There should be a human interaction course added to the national curriculum.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Cute. There should be a human interaction course added to the national curriculum.
10 Years Ago
That would help so much with this issue, I would love that. Thank you!
Now this one make me smile, you know the art of playing with people moods. Great work and keep it up....
Posted 10 Years Ago
Now this one make me smile, you know the art of playing with people moods. Great work and keep it up....
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you! I'm glad I made you smile. :)
10 Years Ago
Indeed you did, you're most welcome
Yes, its no fun to be nervous. We're never sure what we're going to do.
I enjoyed your poem!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Yes, its no fun to be nervous. We're never sure what we're going to do.
I enjoyed your poem!!
10 Years Ago
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)
I was laughing to this one. I could see myself doing that.
Posted 10 Years Ago
I was laughing to this one. I could see myself doing that.
10 Years Ago
Thank you. That's something I would do too!
10 Years Ago
That's so lovely and sweet, I've a friend who would do exactly that :)
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Added on March 9, 2014
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Goat Twin Cities, MN
About
I am a young writer. I love to write humorous stories and meet new people. I would love to read your stories and review them, though i can't promise I'll be too serious. Also, goats are cool.
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