Entwined

Just exploring possibilities ...........

Entwined

Interweaving soft

delicate natural emotions

Threads a

tapestry of mystical desires

Betwixt exchanging

strokes of adoration

Golden glows

the reciprocal consent

Illuminating precincts

within tender souls

Thus soundly

confirm each to one another

No greater

compliment could be discovered

Or to demonstrate

firm reciprocal committal

Then to languish

tenderly entwined in love

Phillozofee @ 2017

Reviews

[lightsong]

Truth what I'm impressed about beside Your splendid style, that feeling through Your poem which allows me to know that You love with both heart and mind, a unique love poem with the perfect photo, one feels the timeless life and love with Your flowing words, ancient immortality, like God and Goddess entwined.

[Ardra]

Entwined one of my fav. word :)
such a beautiful poem...

[Lorry]

Superbly penned. The lines all spoken from the heart and soul, grow in strength and power, with each adding another layer until the piece is completed with your final line. This really holds the readers attention. Excellent.

[Einstein Noodle]

i really like the weaving of concrete and ethereal .. words like exchanging, reciprocal, precincts and demonstrate .. compared to interweaving, soft, mystical, entwined, tender, Golden .. i like the mix ..it brings a healthy balanced feel to this entwinment ;) great pic too .. reminds me of the Ents of Lord of the Rings ... and the Celtic tree of life
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the phrase "reciprocal committal"
and wish there were more of it.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So awesome an image and poem! The image reflects the natural, primal, entwined lovers as described so beautifully in the poem..."A tapestry of mystical desires" so eloquent. Lovely flow and form in couplets. This is reminiscent of the Garden of Eden in It's beauty and perfection.

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words my friend. Your words gave life and vision to the words. Best days is when we are entwined in a love. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote