Entwined

Entwined

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Just exploring possibilities ...........

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Entwined




Interweaving soft

delicate natural emotions


Threads a

tapestry of mystical desires


Betwixt exchanging

strokes of adoration


Golden glows

the reciprocal consent


Illuminating precincts

within tender souls


Thus soundly

confirm each to one another


No greater

compliment could be discovered


Or to demonstrate

firm reciprocal committal


Then to languish

tenderly entwined in love


Phillozofee @ 2017


© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



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Truth what I'm impressed about beside Your splendid style, that feeling through Your poem which allows me to know that You love with both heart and mind, a unique love poem with the perfect photo, one feels the timeless life and love with Your flowing words, ancient immortality, like God and Goddess entwined.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Superbly penned. The lines all spoken from the heart and soul, grow in strength and power, with each adding another layer until the piece is completed with your final line. This really holds the readers attention. Excellent.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really like the weaving of concrete and ethereal .. words like exchanging, reciprocal, precincts and demonstrate .. compared to interweaving, soft, mystical, entwined, tender, Golden .. i like the mix ..it brings a healthy balanced feel to this entwinment ;) great pic too .. reminds me of the Ents of Lord of the Rings ... and the Celtic tree of life
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the phrase "reciprocal committal"
and wish there were more of it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So awesome an image and poem! The image reflects the natural, primal, entwined lovers as described so beautifully in the poem..."A tapestry of mystical desires" so eloquent. Lovely flow and form in couplets. This is reminiscent of the Garden of Eden in It's beauty and perfection.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truth what I'm impressed about beside Your splendid style, that feeling through Your poem which allows me to know that You love with both heart and mind, a unique love poem with the perfect photo, one feels the timeless life and love with Your flowing words, ancient immortality, like God and Goddess entwined.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing use of words my friend. Your words gave life and vision to the words. Best days is when we are entwined in a love. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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