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Trumpty Dumpty tweets

From his fortified wall

No fake sleazy payoffs

Will see me take a fall

But all weak lame denials

And all his slick lawyer friends

Cannot put his reputation

Back together again

(God Bless America)

Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

Reviews

[Kelli April]

OH MY GOODNESS !!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS! I loved, "And all his slick lawyer friends", because it's heartbreakingly true!! Also, I loved how it made me think of the ONLY part of him that is TRUTHFULLY slick, his dang hair. It's the only thing about him that is decently okay. Although, I'm sure he had hair Implants as well. If he did not have his lawyer friends, he would be in s**t creek! Loved this, thank you!!
PS. I wish he would fall off his dumb wall.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Haaaaaa! We seem to be like-minded in thoughts and caricature photos for our poems dear Phill. Love your nursery rhyme-gone-Trump- so cleverly and drolly done. Absolutely On-point. Shall we say- Anyone have a taste for scrambled eggs???!! Love this.

[barleygirl]

There’s so much to write & complain about, plus so many others are doing just that, I try not to write about this topic unless there’s some new twist I can bring to the piece. Here you’ve worded things in an original way & most importantly, you’ve retained your sense of humor, giving your piece a lightheartedness – the most essential thing when everyone else is outraged & grinding on every little issue over & over. An extreme test of our patience! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Phill Oz O'fee]

I was in a mischievous mood at the time - couldn't help myself - bless you :-)

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I think it will be make great movie. But who want make it and who want acting in this. I certainly dont. Nice funny and into the point. I mean your writing well done.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Great one! Subject matter rather traumatic, but executed brilliantly......enjoyed the hint of Humpty Dumpty.....hopefully, all the future king's horses and future queen's men, would be able to put the USA back together again....:)

[emmajoy]

How COULD you do that to me, Phill.. i only wanted pretty pictures and hope in my today day!!
If i could add something i would, but tis Sunday and i don't curse on the day of rest.

Many thanks for ... But all weak lame denials.. .. '

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Ha ha ha ... bless you! :-)

[emmajoy]

Blessed I am! When's Pina Colada time, am waiting?!.

[H L Rose]

Is “HA!” a sufficient review?

[Phill Oz O'fee]

But of course ... happy days! :-)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, God Bless American...and as R.E.M. sang..."everybody hurts, everybody cries"
i suppose except the most powerful ones who always find a way to elude the tears.
Love the wordplay of the title.

[Chris Shaw]

I always loved Humpty Dumpty. One of my favourite nursery rhymes. I say, if the cap fits, then wear it. Clever write and it has me smiling. Good morning.

Chris

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Objective achieved ... thanks for your review my friend ... :-)

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome

[Chris Shaw]

Forgot to say, Great Title, how very appropriate in more ways than one. lol

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Bless you ... :-)