Thoughts

Thoughts

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Overthinking ...

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Thoughts




A stream of aim-free inspiration

Circulates coalition imagination

To oriented veracity conclusions


Even though existential thoughts

Fluctuate in their activity values

They are vague in understanding


The brain cells synapse junctions

Pass impulse minuscule impressions

Across neurotransmitter dark gaps


And the prefrontal cortex persists

In spinning uncontrollable notions

Whether we wanted them or not


Creation challenges are motivated

To choose a moral way of existence

Or succumb into shackling shadows


Is profound thinking a spiritual gift

Or subconscious punishing profanity

At times greatness leads to insanity


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018


© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee



Author's Note

Phill Oz O'fee
A quandary ...

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i always thought you should be in the medical field.... you make all these words sound so sexy lol
love the ending.... :)
a curse a curse and a curse it is the over thinking..... and to get rid of it is a such a trouble some task..

wish sometimes there was some switch to shut it down...when the over ride happens.... then reboot :P

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So deep, yet so beautiful! Loved it!

Posted 1 Week Ago


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wow, so very well written, i really enjoyed the last stanza the most. awesome write

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i think maybe "profound" means deep and "over" means out of proportion when it comes to the mind Phil.
A bit like the narrow line between normal and insane.
I must admit i sometimes kick myself for overthinking it can be a dangerous road to go down.

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i just wonder how moral we poets are...maybe we are an immoral lot and that is way our inspiration is so finicky ...and that is what leads to the profanity that often doesn't reach the page.
j.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


i always thought you should be in the medical field.... you make all these words sound so sexy lol
love the ending.... :)
a curse a curse and a curse it is the over thinking..... and to get rid of it is a such a trouble some task..

wish sometimes there was some switch to shut it down...when the over ride happens.... then reboot :P

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, perplexity and doubt, thoughts and emotions, direction and outcome. All rolled nicely inside this apt poem.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 29, 2018
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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