Cliff of Doubt, Mask of Fear

Cliff of Doubt, Mask of Fear

A Poem by PianoFiend
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Meaningless "poetry" that is supposedly a metaphor...

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The paint runs down my face,

it feels sticky and smells of rust.

The fumes send me staggering,

and in the processs, my heel catches on a rock.

I backflip off the cliff I was dumbly perched on.

I hit the ground.

This is the lowest I've ever been,

and I'm in too much pain to climb back up.

© 2011 PianoFiend


Author's Note

PianoFiend
I thought of this when I was thinking about how much Shakespeare sucks....
Enjoy!

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lovely writing.
sorrows and defeat in a nice little bunch of words.
thank you so much

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Tags: metaphors, blood, pain, suffering, fear

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PianoFiend
PianoFiend

Lincoln, CA



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My name is Misty, I am 15, and I go to Lincoln High School. Who I am can be found in my writing, though not directly. My favorite writers are: Fyoder Dostoevsky, Lewis Carrol, and J.K. Rowling. M.. more..

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