for i have come to save thee and thy people

came out of nowhere!

"As you lay dieing cold and wet
seething with such silent lament
I smooth the hair from thy face
as i hold you in a sweet embrace
i have come to save thee and thy people
Why have they caused such pain
making all go quite insane
but do not think that you are done
even though your minds are unraveled
for i hold the needle and thread
we shall be steadfast in your healing
slowly but surly you began to heal
we shall be victorious in our revenge
for they shall not see there vicious end
and we shall have a new beginning
now they are dead and the evil is gone
we shall have what we have longed for
freedom."

Author's Note

tell me what you think please! i am bursting with random writing energy! review it!

Reviews

[Indyinn]

I see a an active poet in you! Well done my friend!

[Katie]

Very nice, I can't write poetry to save my life so I think yours it really awesome! :)

[Can't bring myself to d..]

I dont know all that much about poetry, but this was pretty good i'd say. and interesting story and unique word choice to boot. I liked it, good work