~That Type of Love~

~That Type of Love~

A Poem by *~Poetic_Essence~*
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Its hard to describe Love itself..so the best way for me to describe my love for someone is to compare it to the things that I love..and sweets are definitely it...lol

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~That Type Of Love~

You give me that sweet
Sugar coated, candy dipped
Irresistible type love…

That apple-cinnamon,
Peaches and whipped cream,
Strawberry flavored type love…

        Mmm you take my breath away
        When you give me that…

Baskin and Robbins
31 mouth-watering flavors
Of ice-cream type love...
         Or
That chocolate that melts
In your mouth,
But not in your hand type love…
          Baby
You give me that long-lasting
Taste-bud teasing, fresh flavored
Bubble gum chewing type love

          But my ultimate favorite 
          Is that…

Reese’s Pieces
Peanut butter, chocolate covered,
Lil’ piece of heaven type love…

          Baby that sweet type of love
          Is what you give me…
 

© 2008 *~Poetic_Essence~*


Author's Note

*~Poetic_Essence~*
This was written for someone..started out as a joke but then I just kept writing and it turned into a poem..I hope you enjoy it as much as I do..

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I did...its a sweet poem, no pun intended:-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. It kinda makes me hungry but it's very sweet (no pun intended haha)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it! Not that I am suprised. I usually only review a couple of someone writings before I get bored.
Here I am and I am just making my way down your whole page. The sad thing is I have never read your stuff before.
Love All, Mejasha

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol delicious. Great job. its the kind of poem that makes u wanna keep reading on cuz its just as tasty to mind as to the tounge. kudos.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i couldn't keep myself from smiling while i read this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very tasty! Delicious!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reminds me of one of Gerald Levert's old songs....I like it.

I like the way you used sweets and candy to symbolize that since you are filled with this love, there's no way you will still be hungry...for anyone else's goodies. *smile*

Be Blessed
~*Soulful w/ Words~*





Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hummm!! I enjoyed how you creatively used sweets to capture love in a very contagious way. Great read.
mm

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol u u u...once again doing what you do best...Kudos to you queen

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it. Simply love it. It's very sweet. No pun intended.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 6, 2008

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I am 21 years old...I have been writing since I was in middle-school, I write because when there is no one else to listen to my pain, Pen and Paper always hear me..lol..I feel as if poetry is not what.. more..

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