Wanna See You Smile

Wanna See You Smile

A Poem by Priyanshi

Fade up and  stressful you  look;

Embroiled and entangled in a trap,

In a trap of destructive thoughts,

And that's so painful, so leave  that,

And  come out with a smile

 

Those glinting eyes lost their spark

When pain slammed on you.

Face turning into dark pale,

Coming through that,

 I wanna see you smile.

 

The phases you are passing through

Is known to me, yet I'm  helpless

Though  I wanna help you

Because I wanna see you smile

 

You stood out as an inspiration,

 for me, always there in the places

Where I needed you and still need you,

So I wanna see you smile.

 

Though a couple of times  we spent

And you became my best friend

Ah, a sweet bond of friendship exist

So, I wanna see you smile.

 

Miles of distances we carry

Still, we are great buddies

because heart are connected,

And so I wanna see you smile

 

 Your problems are known to me,

Yet no ideas to solve them

I'm feeling disgusted now,

And need  you to make me smile,

 

   I always needed you

And still, need you

And will need you

So I wanna see you smile.


© 2017 Priyanshi



Author's Note

Priyanshi
Still, a try to bring that lost smile of someone.... hope the readers like it. I know, the poem need to be edited, but still ...I wanted to present it in the way it came from my heart. Thanks .

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Truly inspiring. If we would all take time, to make someone smile and forget about their troubles, for only a minute or two. More of this is needed as the world in whole, is crying out in fear and rage, as ISIS continues to plot and kill many here and there.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

2 Days Ago

Yeah, agree with you..
Thank you so much, Maria for the appreciating review...thanks once ag.. read more
Maria

2 Days Ago

You are very welcomed



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Truly inspiring. If we would all take time, to make someone smile and forget about their troubles, for only a minute or two. More of this is needed as the world in whole, is crying out in fear and rage, as ISIS continues to plot and kill many here and there.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

2 Days Ago

Yeah, agree with you..
Thank you so much, Maria for the appreciating review...thanks once ag.. read more
Maria

2 Days Ago

You are very welcomed
Awesome one priyanshi Ji....I really loved it

Posted 3 Days Ago


Priyanshi

3 Days Ago

Thank you..sweet girl. 'm happy for this kind review...thanks once again.
I liked it, it is wonderful and hope it will bring smile on that Someone's ' face..

Posted 4 Days Ago


Priyanshi

3 Days Ago

I too hope so, Thank you Farhan, for the lovely review...thanks once again.
This is so sweet and beautiful. I loved it. For me, it's one of your best poems. It's really very amazing. I'm glad I read this poem first among all the RRs. It brought a smile :) keep writing dear :)

Posted 4 Days Ago


Priyanshi

4 Days Ago

Oh, Your review made me smile, friends like you always encourage me to write more...glad to have fri.. read more
Sofia

4 Days Ago

You're welcome dear and even I'm glad to have you as a friend :)
Aww this is so awesome. A great friend you are & would be to have in life. I really like this one. It's like I can hear & see you standing in front of me, wiping my tears from today. Thank you Priyanshi.... Cheryl aka Im His Daughter

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

4 Days Ago

O.M.G., My pleasure, that you loved it...glad for the kind review, thank you so much.. So I've known.. read more
Im His Daughter

4 Days Ago

Very few like unless they have read a poem with my name in it, or are on my FB know my name. :) Coun.. read more
Priyanshi

4 Days Ago

Okay, then, I'm the lucky one...Hurray..glad to have you as a friend.
Thank you very much, your poem made me smile a little :)
The world could use people like you around to make others smile, when you smile you can forget about all of the bad things going on for your head and you will feel better, even if its for a short time, at least you forgot about what was troubling you.

Thank you for sharing, this has been a really good read :)

Posted 4 Days Ago


Priyanshi

4 Days Ago

I'm glad that it made you smile...thank you very much, Joey , for the appreciating review...thanks .. read more
Joey Nizz

4 Days Ago

You are most welcome :)
This is a sweet poem! Even though life can be hard we never wanna see our loved ones down. I love the way this was written :)

Posted 4 Days Ago


Priyanshi

4 Days Ago

Thank you, Friend so much.....You loved my poem, i'm happy....thanks for your kind visit and review.. read more
just wanna see you smile,cause i`m in love with you,so smile

Posted 4 Days Ago


Priyanshi

4 Days Ago

Hey, thank you , sir so much....'m happy with your review and thanks once again.
i would always want to see a smile on my beloved's face!!...and everybody would do the same thing for their beloved one....i loved this work of yours...the font was quite chota!!...
but the poetry was amazing.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

4 Days Ago

Oops! I think that spoiled your joy of reading....next time I shall keep in mind.
Thank yo.. read more
Wajiha Nayeem

4 Days Ago

always a pleasure dear.....
Thank you for bringing a smile to us, the readers :)
This was really hopeful and inspirational as well!
Well done, keep it up!

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

5 Days Ago

No problem :)
I really wanna thank you tbh
Priyanshi

5 Days Ago

sorry, but tbh means?....
Mr.Writer

5 Days Ago

oh lol, it means "to be honest" :)

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