Its Over!

A simple break-up poem

It’s over 

Life isn’t 

The air is still free 

Breathe 

And let me breathe 

It’s over 

Life must go on

Be 

And let me be

 

Author's Note

Common sense 😾

Reviews

[LazerRays]

You're right ditzy, your partner may be gone. But the air isn't. Your life isn't. The only concern is "life must go one" do you mean life must go on? I'm a bit confused. Other than that this is a very inspirational poem. The meaning is blunt and obvious perfecty. Short and sweet. Nice job!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Awww...thank you for the kind words Sarah. I'm licking my wounds right now. Should be up on my feet in no time. Thank you :)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Yes like this
A matter of fact like mother would say
I like it thanks for friend request looking forward to reading your poetry

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you so much!