Got A Blank space

Well I wrote this poem from a motivation/sense I got from the song " Blank space" by Taylor Swift Hope you all will enjoy it ;)

Do I’ve any reason to lean in

Tell me what’s cupid planning

I don’t wanna live in daze

Baby because I tasted all of this

They are old game

 

I know your motive

You know mine

I’m a dark angel of evil

Don’t say I didn’t say, I didn’t warn ya

 Utter if you can love me harder

Beyond the sparks, fireflies

Can you fight the wind?

The one that surrounds me?

 

Ya darling  right

I need a prince

More than a day

We share our deepest kiss

 

We are young, we are reckless

We will take this way too far

Only if your chances are open

There are still so much to say

Coming from two pair of lips

Nay..

So I got a blank space baby

Perhaps

I can write your name

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Indeed, it reads a bit as a song, but it's surely more than that. You are really talented, ReD. :) Rudi

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much Rudi for your nice view :)) !

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

Always my pleasure. :) Rudi

[Elie Marie]

ooompf. this is good. I've got a blank space... but there's a name in invisible ink. ugh feelings.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ohw thank you so much :))!

[Sophy Freebirds]

Baby i am a nightmare dressed as a daydream ;) its my favourite song... I saw this poem as being featured.I saw the title and jumped in here... hah :p.... i loved it.Not only because it was inspired from TS Blank space but you also did a commendable job. Being evil is good ;)... killers in stilletos are always bad ... *keep writing*

~Sophy

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you ! :)) u really got me there with it ! haha

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you ! :)) u really got me there with it ! haha

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you ! :)) u really got me there with it ! haha bcz i m nightmare dressed as day dream

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you ! :)) u really got me there with it ! haha bcz i m nightmare dressed as day dream

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you ! :)) u really got me there with it ! haha bcz i m nightmare dressed as a day dream

[Sophy Freebirds]

:) was a pleasure sweetie ... i hopeu can make the bad guys good for a weekend?? *winks* takecare

[Lenah Mehzabin]

nop it will be > ''We can make the bad guys good for a weekend
We can show them all incredible * things ;)) ''

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yeah we can :-) ;-) girl i really like you... haha we can also make all the tables turn...

[Lenah Mehzabin]

So it's gonna be forever
Or it's gonna go down in flames ;)

But u r really cool Sophy dear
thanks again ! :D

[Sophy Freebirds]

:-* aww.... thanks girl you are also very cool to hang out with.. wish we could meet.. haha. tc

[Arsh]

So, what're ya awaiting for? Write my name out there.

Nice poetry or song. Most of people get inspired by the very songs, but only few allows their heart to get written unto the pages. You're found one of 'em who write away! Sounds delightful by me.. doesn't it? Of course, it does.

Pain/love/wounds/heartaches/peace to piece/sadness you drink/get poured on the rain/filtered into the drops/words plucked off your red-heart/burnt into ashes/emotional feelings... such things're found in your words which speak directly to me. Again... good by me.. isn't it? Of course, it is.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

pleasure pleasure pleasure !!!! ; ) dear and alo thank u so so much ! :-)

[Arsh]

Again 3-times pleasure. Sounds sexy by me.. doesn't it? Hell, of course, it does. Well... why don`t say.. "Kiss kiss kiss" instead of pleasure pleasure pleasure? (you can laugh if you want to)

[Lenah Mehzabin]

No need to say ! m alrdy ! u seriously make laugh all the tym haha talented

[Arsh]

Good.. very good.. you soon make me numbed.. ain't ya? Of course, you're. Lol You amazing, red one. Honored to have you around the shades of my heart all the time. You seemed give me breath. Don't ya? of course, you do.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Boom~ dead ; ) haha

[Arsh]

Hey... now this time you really made me chuckle ;)

[Lupus Kaos]

this poem seems so deceiving and honest the same time, I feel like the empty space is something lovely and something to hate at the same time. You surely have lots of inspiration Lenah/ReD and that you take out in your poems in such a wonderfull way. Thank you for sharing.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

"I'' thank you for such a kind view and glad so much that u liked it :)

[armin]

First of all, thanks for taking inspiration from her song. If you have read my profile, must know how madly I am in love with her.
Ok, your write it was seriously a great attempt you did complete justice to taylor so far. I praise you for these lines, impressively written
I know your motive
You know mine
I’m a dark angel of evil
Don’t say I didn’t say, I didn’t warn ya

Lenah, according to your age you did a splendid job maybe you will have to learn more when it comes to songwriting. But I enjoyed it. I remembered taylor's first song 'tim macgraw' when she was a teen like you.
I miss my teenage too, just passed it 5 months back now going to be 20 in June.
And I am really thankful to you for sharing something related to my taylor.
All the best for further songwriting experiences.
Keep it up.

armin. ...

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Thank you so much ! armin ,I myself love taylor a lot too and that's how i wrote this "Poem"
It looks good as a poem I think, song will not suit so well . You are right . I'm so glad you enjoyed it ! :)

[armin]

it was a pleasure to read it.