Darkness

I say I find this darkness my home,
the light was just a fallacy.
A tale, it kindles some home,
A lie, we cling for support.
People of this cursed land,
Why pretend to not know.
This world too will someday be destroyed,
by a star it lovingly called its own.

Reviews

[Phoenix]

This is beautiful and well-written. The only line I wasn't particularly fond of was line 6. I think it could be rewritten to communicate the same meaning in a more eloquent way that fits with the rest of the poem. I really love the first line and last two lines the most.

[Raghib]

How about me replacing it with
"Why pretend to not know" ?

[wordman]

love and pain,every thing changes

[Raghib]

Yes it does . It does

[sette]

i like the poem, it shows how there is darkness in life. a good poem very well written

[Raghib]

Thank you . Do visit more friend

[sette]

i will definitely visit again

[Najam Us Saher]

There is a reflection of honesty in your words. I love this poem a lot, it's true and effective.

[Raghib]

Thanks Najam !

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend. Honest and direct thoughts. I did like them. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Raghib]

Thank you for your praise .

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.