Baby

Baby

A Poem by Raja
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You, my existence and my rhythm...

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In about a sense’s pick

In about a mad desire

In about a dream

In about a sweet rhythm

You’ve come…

 

In about all my tensions

In about all my en routes to thunders

In about the happiness

In about the play

You’ve touched

          All my being with your magic flesh, mind capturing smell, and astounding eyes

          You " my senses, my desire, dream, sweet rhythm, and play with world

Now, I long to shout, standing on hill, on what

          Gift I possess, to the sun, moon, stars, and thousands of black nights and dazzling days, and to the

          Restless wind and green woods,

          You " my existence… born forever!!


© 2010 Raja



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touching and well put

Posted 6 Years Ago


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beautiful very eloquently said.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Ohhh thats wonderful, congratulations on this touching poem and more for the event of new life. Thank you for sharing this with us, just wonderful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your words lift the reader, like the wind under a kite, taking us into this joyous song of life and love! What you've created here is simply astounding. Each line a vibrant vision, touching the heart and mind with rich emotion. Love this write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Restless wind and green woods,

You " my existence… born forever!!


A most tender heartwarming and beautifully penned piece~

very well crafted indeed!


Posted 7 Years Ago


wow what a wonderful piece... great write!!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Raja
Raja

Mumbai, India



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Writing is my passion. I write stories, poems and scripts in English and in Bengali. I love to portray the optimistic part of human life with a contrast to the real world. Writing is the most powerfu.. more..

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