The Rose Warriors

There was that time I was wondering what's the point about getting the roses for someone else like that, so I played with my imaginations and here's my unusual idea on what I may be thinking.

 

The Real Story Of The Rise And The Fall

Of The Ultimate Survival Of All Flowers

Possibly The Most Powerful Of Them All

Prepare To Believe In Their Truest Power

 

Births Out Of The Small And Simple Seeds

Reaching Out Of The Ground With The Stems

Knowing The True Meanings Of The Deeds

As Rich As They Would Be The Priceless Gems

 

Standing Tall As High As The True Soldiers

With The Weapons Of Their Own Thorns

Waging The Wars Against The Evildoers

Never Ever To Be Neither Tired Nor Worn

 

Only Way To Be Destroyed By One Thing

Helplessly Very Much Like Every Babies

Are Every One Of The Creatures' Dirty Skins

Infecting Just Like Out Of Control Rabies

 

Their Lives Already Slowly Dripping

Staining On All Of Hands And Gloves

For The Pickers' Intentions Of Giving

Toward To The Others For The Loves

 

Fact Of The Ways They Were Meant To Be

I Guess That The Roses Were Really Nice

About That They Were Loved To Be Seen

And How They Paid For The Perfect Price

 

Author's Note

I know, I've got some strange ways of seeing and thinking things like that, so don't mind me.

Reviews

[JC]

If you have ever tried to get rid of a rose bush, you would soon find out they are near impossible to destroy. You cut them down to the ground, they come back. You try to dig them out, and find their roots deeply embedded in the ground. The more you try disband them, the hardier they become. Sure, some years their bloom is better than others, but year after year they come back. Sounds alot like Love to me.
Strange no, I'd say your right on target.

[just is]

Their Lives Already Slowly Dripping
Staining On All Of Hands And Gloves
For The Pickers' Intentions Of Giving
Toward To The Others For The Loves

Love these lines Joe, this is very well written

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

lol...dominance...

I'm a sucker for roses... well, everyone knows that. :P It's funny how you make this so deep... This is also kind of funny too. JC's review kind of made me laugh, so I couldn't help but give a humorous smile. ^^ Anyways, great job with this. :) It was a great read.

Ironically Yours.

[darkgurl]

"Standing Tall As High As The True Soldiers
With The Weapons Of Their Own Thorns
Waging The Wars Against The Evildoers
Never Ever To Be Neither Tired Nor Worn" these lines here are just wonderful and true really. Very well written.....Kim

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

Beautifully penned, and the rhyming works wonders. One of the best pieces I have read for a while! Brilliant!

[shadadakiya]

the rose is my favoret flower,i love this its strong but yet beautiful,thx,hugs

[LostCauze[:P]]

Very Creative and Unique Way Of Thinking. My favorite stanza was the second one because of the details, imagery and the last line pretty much got me. I really enjoyed this piece, its always nice to read something "Different" and get you thinking and inspired to do the same. Keep writing.

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Yes you do!
LOL!
Just read this poem.
Didn't get have of it,
but I enjoyed.
Keep writing.

[None]

Your way of writing brings to mind so many thoughts--a wonderful byproduct of a fantastic poem!
Your words....
"Standing Tall As High As The True Soldiers With The Weapons Of Their Own Thorns
Waging The Wars Against The Evildoers Never Ever To Be Neither Tired Nor Worn"
...brought to mind such a picture here...a painting. I enjoyed your fantastic write!

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I feel so dreadfully sorry now to pluck them in all their glory, that they could know ... did you ever see "Chicken Run", that animation about how the hens knew all along what was happening, to see your end at your beginning, I am a barbaric florist...no no I hope it isn't true, though nobody has really proved that they can not feel as such, they are still alive in stem and flower after cutting... some think they are not, but they die slowly. Your stanzas are perfectly formed and rhyming throughout. "Their Lives Already Slowly Dripping
Staining On All Of Hands And Gloves" ... Best wishes.

[lowena]

Great little piece.