Pieces of Him

Two pieces of him
fight,
fight to reign
over him.
Neither of them
wants a truce
that ends the war
and ensures harmonious co-existence.
Each of them
wants an absolute rule
by one
over absolute him.
So they fight,
fight to reign
over him.
Sometimes
the third piece
forms
and involves in the war.
But
never
do they join
to be one piece of him.

-Lokesh

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Seems a bit of bipolar existence in this write... by the actions that the two pieces are always trying to gain control.. neither can win... a constant stalemate...

[MandaBear]

I am glad I got to read this. Great Job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. Always conflicts in life and thoughts. I like the way you led the reader. A very good ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote