Once Again

Once Again

A Poem by Sahar moonlight
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After five years passed, i am once again beside my window looking at the moon. That was the result

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As I sit here
Beside my window
On a black chair

I hear the clock

Four rings
The time it shares

A gentle breeze

Plays with my hair
Around my face it flows

I take a look all around

Black sky
Hundreds of stars glow

Then I look back again

At my moon
So high, so bright

I smile

As I finish my poem
Under the moon light




The moon was so far from my window, but i tried to catch a photo

© 2012 Sahar moonlight



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Wow. You captured the moment beautifully~

Posted 5 Years Ago


Its amazing well done :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

thanks :)
I smile
As I finish my poem
Under the moon light
I had never thought of that! Great rhyme and rhythm.
100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Katerina

5 Years Ago

you're welcome
exquisite is the word !

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

thanks :)
I liked how you presented this little moment.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful!!! I like you calling it "My moon" very interesting somewhere you named your inspiration!! Beautiful work indeed!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks alot :)
Ah , the beauty of the night with the moon.
Well written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks,
Absolutely, moon is the most beautiful thing on earth ( although its not in earth)
I can say I have actually done this before. Listening to the things around me and just watching the sky...all the while emotions are being processed. But anyway it was well penned.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thanks Raven :)
Strong feelings, written with even stronger words!
Nicely done...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dean!
Wonderful imagery captured....i felt it reading it :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sahar moonlight

5 Years Ago

Am glad to know that :)

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Sahar moonlight
Sahar moonlight

France



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Hello everybody. Here is Sahar. I am from Lebanon living in France. I'm a mathematician but sometimes I find in myself the will to write something. I enjoy reading a lot and I was glad to join this.. more..

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