W.G.( II )

Now to the memories of me when I'm with you.

Or was with you

I wish I could give up 4 forevers and a day to relive just one moment of us

When you smiled that foul's smile you had 

I couldn't help but kiss you 

I loved you

When you held me in your arms

While i cried, sobbing on your favorite jacket

I loved you

When you pinned me

And continued to tickled me as I screamed Stop!

I loved you

When I was on the edge of suicide

And you slapped me

Telling me how I could be so stupid

I loved you

When I screw up

Badly

And you ignore me 

I still love you

But you don't

So here is my last word to him:

Marco.

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

A very nice work, he must be really wondering now why he left you.

[CMC]

Good work, I liked the anaphora you used with the phrase "I love you." The writing is powerful, and I loved reading it, especially aloud.

[Sammie Sanchez]

Only he would understands the last word