A.A.

People saw us and they laugh

We were the partners in crime

The best friends

But since May

Distance sucks a*s

Without your witty remarks about my life

Without your advice 

I've been lost

I can't figure how to live

Life properly that is

I can't sing this duet solo

I can't play with my hair alone

I can't make white chocolate pancakes

Without burning them of course

But without you I can't think straight

It's hard to focus on the right things

The right rather than the wrong 

Because the wrong right now 

Is a lot brighter than the right

And I need you to be my light

I miss you

P.S. See you at the bookstore

Reviews

[Manasa.L]

The longing of a friend or even more of a person is beautifully described. When we miss someone who is very nearer to us, we cannot express how much we feel lost but you have done it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.

[CMC]

There are days when I feel lost without someone too. It's something that is really hard to express in words, but you've managed to capture it perfectly. Thank you for sharing Sam.

[Cy!]

White chocolate pancakes? I never had those before sounds delicious.

This sounds like a friendship that maybe could be something more. The longing and the hope is displayed pretty nicely.

Lovely work

[Sammie Sanchez]

Thanks you