Simplicity

As clear as a summer's day

Beneath the calm of a rainbow

I am no longer bewildered

And the rain does no harm

 

I get rid of a clouded mind

I embrace the pink of the cherry

I crossed the bridge to find

What was always meant to be us

 

The words I struggle to let out

I do not speak enough

I love, I love.. I love

Author's Note

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Michelle 🌾

Gently, tenderly, warmly touching to one's heart and soul, the quaint timbre of your title, breath-sighing artwork, wondrously voiced poetical diction, and sweetly captivating musical choice all metaphorically conspire to entwine an olde bard's deepest imaginative dreams and sensations unto your own ⁓ in vivid embrace.
I'm irresistibly drawn to masterful Free Verse, and yours, so vibrantly alive, I cannot help but love in a wonderfully unique, unforgettable way.
Sooo much meaning sings out from within these lines:
"As clear as a summer's day
Beneath the calm of a rainbow
I am no longer bewildered
And the rain does no harm"

Thank you ever-so warmly, Michelle, for sharing this beautiful part of You ⁓ Richard🖌

[Michelle N. H.]

I wrote this poem as a gift for Valentine's Day to my husband, whom I was only dating at the time. The words came out very effortlessly, maybe because my feelings were so pure and therefore in a way.. simple. Your review makes me smile and feel so humbled. Thank you, Richard, for connecting to my poem and for leaving me with this review to take in. It really makes my day!

[Richard🖌]

Your sincere affection is literally palpable to the senses … he must have soared over the moon! 🌝

[Michelle N. H.]

In his own way. Thank you =)

[Richard🖌]

I'll bet! : )

[KeeD]

You build heartstrings and pluck them to the tune of your love in this piece. You bridge the connect between two hearts and give us a tour above the river of your love.

[APOORVA]

beautiful work indeed.
extremely lively

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work... very enjoyable read.... thanks for sharing :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

Very beautiful words, Mi.

[wordman]

and so I let my feelings flow,i do love