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This is my first attempt at slam poetry, and I'm excited to film a performance of this piece over the coming day.
Monsters in the mirror

Monsters in the mirror

A Poem by Sam

I'm scared by what I see.
There's a monster in the mirror
And it's looking back at me.
I blinked and it blinked too
It even has the same fake smile I do,
I realized that the monsters me
And that self destruction has a pricey fee.

© 2017 Sam



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The poem can be considered brilliant because it clearly expressed the inner monstrosity of human being. A mirror is nothing but a medium where we see our own reflections, mirror shows us our error and the dark side which can not be seen with bare eyes.

The stanzas are well written and nicely rhymed, really a great piece of work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sam

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the review!
omg i love it sam

Posted 2 Months Ago


Sam

2 Months Ago

Thank you!
Hey Sam, I liked the first three lines a lot. Kind of went downhill after that. I'm not sure the last line follows on from the rest of the poem. "price fee" is a bit redundant and awkward.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Sam

3 Months Ago

Thank you for the tips! I will definitely continue to work on it. (I ment pricey not price) :( thank.. read more
emipoemi

3 Months Ago

Can't speak for buddy, but it was surely a pleasure for me.
Sam

3 Months Ago

Thank you! :)

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Hi my name is M. Sam Teague every just calls Sam. I'm a student by day and a writer by... well whenever I get time. My hobbies include anything from sitting in bed all day to rock climbing and skiing more..

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