Monsters in the mirror

Monsters in the mirror

A Poem by Sam

I'm scared by what I see.
There's a monster in the mirror
And it's looking back at me.
I blinked and it blinked too
It even has the same fake smile I do,
I realized that the monsters me
And that self destruction has a pricey fee.

© 2017 Sam



Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

The poem can be considered brilliant because it clearly expressed the inner monstrosity of human being. A mirror is nothing but a medium where we see our own reflections, mirror shows us our error and the dark side which can not be seen with bare eyes.

The stanzas are well written and nicely rhymed, really a great piece of work.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Sam

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the review!
omg i love it sam

Posted 10 Months Ago


Sam

10 Months Ago

Thank you!
Hey Sam, I liked the first three lines a lot. Kind of went downhill after that. I'm not sure the last line follows on from the rest of the poem. "price fee" is a bit redundant and awkward.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Sam

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the tips! I will definitely continue to work on it. (I ment pricey not price) :( thank.. read more
emipoemi

11 Months Ago

Can't speak for buddy, but it was surely a pleasure for me.
Sam

11 Months Ago

Thank you! :)

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

107 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 26, 2017
Last Updated on July 8, 2017

Author

Sam
Sam

WY



About
Hi my name is M. Sam Teague every just calls Sam. I'm a student by day and a writer by... well whenever I get time. My hobbies include anything from sitting in bed all day to rock climbing and skiing more..

Writing
Mask Mask

A Poem by Sam


Can’t see Can’t see

A Poem by Sam


I love you I love you

A Poem by Sam