Vacancy

Vacancy

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Everyday that follows

Gives birth to less hope.

Every morning I try on

A new soul

Because the one I dressed myself

Yesterday,

Or the moon before

Has grown old

And oh so tired

With my groans

As well as moans…

There are no need for clothes

Because my heart is

Bare,

Naked,

OPEN!

But every night the sign reads as closed

And there’s really no

Reason why my heart is this vacant...



© 2015 sinNsincerity



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I loved the expletive of "OPEN!" in this! It really shows the passion, as well as frustrations you feel within this poem. I think that was my favorite part of the poem because I'm also quite passionate when it comes to feelings, so I immediately connected to it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

And that makes my day to hear so! I'm now mastering to turn passion into compassion so I may open up.. read more



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Powerful and sad journey in your words my friend. When the heart is broken. We do feel vacant and alone. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


Lovely as ever.

Your fan, Ana B. :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

9 Months Ago

Thank you once again Ana! Likewise.
I loved the expletive of "OPEN!" in this! It really shows the passion, as well as frustrations you feel within this poem. I think that was my favorite part of the poem because I'm also quite passionate when it comes to feelings, so I immediately connected to it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

And that makes my day to hear so! I'm now mastering to turn passion into compassion so I may open up.. read more
Beheld as a distinct entity separate from body, the soul is always spiritually naked and difficult to comprehend at times. Forlornness occupies this space.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Faith is what keeps my going and handing over my anxieties of loneliness over to God is the only thi.. read more
You just described the existential crisis in such a beautiful way. All nihilists should read that!
Thank you.

p.s: loneliness is the modern deadly sickness

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

A dilemma I've been faced with for quite some time.
And thank you Marina, I highly appreciate.. read more
You are to words like water for chocolate. Continue to grow and spread your imagery .... You are a poetic eagle

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Bless your heart Tiffany, I really do appreciate that.
Hope you have a splendid day.
Love it. Very deep and personal. "Every morning I try on a new soul" Amazing!
"And there's really no reason why my heart is this vacant." I can relate.
Great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you Nina, I'm so glad that you could relate.
Loneliness is a killer.
This poem is so beautiful and revealing. I can relate so much to the last two lines, "And there's really no reason why my heart is this vacant..." I ask myself why it is I feel the way I feel all the time, but never get an answer. Maybe we'll find it through writing.

Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Very much so Eli, I truly understand how you feel. Quite a journey is has been so far...
Hello Sin in Sincerity,

Another good poem! I like how raw, how bare the emotions are. There is one line though that has a bit of awkward wording: Because the one I dressed myself. Did you mean Because the one that dressed myself? Or perhaps it's missing a comma? Because the one, I dressed myself. Anyway, other than that one line, it is beautifully written.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

Thank you for thinking so Schatzi, but I believe there is no need for punctuation there.
If y.. read more
Ha, good piece ....
Although the rhyme scheme is not uniform, this appears to be one of those poems which are better without rhymes..
Every poem is not meant to rhyme, it's all about the feelings and emotions put into it. And, yes , this is a beautiful piece showing how a heart is vacant even when there's a lot surrounding you, but it's really understandable... the feeling I mean... And for sure, it's vacant for the only one and will soon be filled when that special someone enters into life...
Good to read....
Anindita : )


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

1 Year Ago

I do that intentionally. Every poem I write is a different kind of special and has a life of it's ow.. read more

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