Paradise Lost

Paradise Lost

A Poem by sinNsincerity

Paper hearts.

No paper clips.

Just paper cuts.

Tin cups and string nights

connected and collected

like thoughts of the

darkest and enlightened plots.

A sword to fall on; such as,

a poets lust.

Yikes!

-Was her reply.

We both believed in the power of magic.

So hungry for the knowledge to provide one another,

but we were only willing to share half of the brain.

So Divine;

yet,

tragic.

The view...

Of your soul

was solely my food.

Causing me to sleepwalk through

dewy slumbers

with nothing to remember.

Drowning...

But finally,

your heart has been unveiled

as a cloud of omens.

I mean amens.

A love cursed,

yet blessed.

I dare you to love me.





© 2017 sinNsincerity



Author's Note

sinNsincerity
T.W.A
Gothpel

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Bloody fantastic. Addicted to your page

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know the place from whence that dare comes. :) This is a great piece. I like that it doesn't rhyme. I like the flow and the raw feel of vulnerability. Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

2 Months Ago

Thank you SM Davis, I really glad that you enjoyed this piece.
Loved this! :)
Amazing piece

Posted 4 Months Ago


fabulous i d say....such an attractive piece it was!!

Posted 5 Months Ago


This piece is just fabulous. I love the way your mind works.
The images evoked are intriguing and passionate.
You are an amazing writer.

Posted 5 Months Ago


i love the way this poem is written.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

7 Months Ago

Thank you Asmae, I'm really glad that you did.
Paper hearts/No paper clips/Just paper cuts.

Great lines! Deep and poignant poem...nicely done.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for thinking so Reed!
Too deep and nicely written... enjoyed it

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

Thank you Parachi, I'm glad that you did!
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"As a cloud of omens.
I mean amens."

Loved it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sinNsincerity

6 Months Ago

Yea, those are really cool antitheses. I'm glad you did love it!
I like how deep the poem is then you end it with "I dare you" making it seem playful and light hearted.

Posted 8 Months Ago



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