NOT Another Love Poem

NOT Another Love Poem

A Poem by Seeker
"

I was in denial. Humor me.

"

This is NOT another love poem.


Too many times has my pen

graced these pages with

teenage monologues,

whimsical fantasies,

hesitant dreams,

and timid hopes.


Not a love poem,

'cuz then I'd be thinking of your eyes,

how your lips moved over mine,

how your voice sounded in my ear,

low, just for me, heated...


But noooo...!

NOT a love poem,

not a 'like' poem, either.

Not an I-like-him-but-he-doesn't-like-me poem,

or a

he-has-a-girlfriend-and-I-don't-wanna-be-a-home-wrecker type poem.

No.

No.

NO.


This is a poem,

banishing all love poems.

(yeah right..)



 

Originally written:    June. 1. 09


© 2009 Seeker



Author's Note

Seeker
I was frustrated and angry and I couldn't be bothered. This is one of my more 'retarded-moment' pieces. Tell me what you think. I seriously want to know.

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i liked the slight contrast and the strong emotions that are there

Posted 7 Years Ago


i really like this, especially the humor/irony tied into it. i especially liked the "teenage monologues,

whimsical fantasies,

hesitant dreams,

and timid hopes." part; it reminds me of "i won't say i'm in love" XD

Posted 8 Years Ago


it makes the reader wonder just how many styles of love poetry is out there, this definitely captures its own class. great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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The poem reminded me of the song "This is not a love song" by Public Image Ltd. I can really feel the anger and confusion of this poem. I think some of the best writing comes from just raw emotion and this poem definitely has that . great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think it was very well expressed. Funny in a way? =|
Best poetry seems to be written when you experiencing intense emotions of some sort. Ah, well thats what i think at least when i read them.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I seriously liked it, your creative, using your pen to express an angry feeling
-Flo

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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