In the Doorway

In the Doorway

A Poem by Adam M. Snow
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In your doorway, I come knocking, let not your worries be flocking. I know your troubles, oh heavy-hearted. I know when you're misery started.

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In the Doorway
Written by Adam M. Snow

In your doorway, I come knocking,
let not your worries be flocking.
I know your troubles, oh heavy-hearted.
I know when you're misery started.

Ev'ry day you feel it grow,
on the brink, such great low.
Still I wait, patiently,
till you answer the door for Me.

Don't you fret now My child,
let not your heart beguiled.
I have come to give you rest,
if you allow Me to be your guest.

In your doorway I stand before,
knocking, knocking at your door.
I'll wait here, patiently waiting,
lest not your sorrow abating.

Your door is locked,
yet still I knock
knock, knocking at your door;
still My child, you ignore.

I won't leave you,
nor forsake you,
during your raging war;
here am I at your door.

Are you willing, truly willing,
lest not My love fulfilling?
Open your door so I may come in
and I'll wash clean your ev'ry sin.

Knock, knocking. My love is true,
I am waiting in the doorway for you.


© 2017 Adam M. Snow



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The repetition and rhyming worked very well in this piece. i find those tricky myself. Thank you for the nice, uplifting poem!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Hopeful and positive words my friend.
"Knock, knocking. My love is true,
I am waiting in the doorway for you."
I liked the above lines and I agree with your thoughts. Thank you Adam for sharing the amazing and worthwhile poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


Gentle yet powerful. ...well penned my friend!

Posted 1 Month Ago


This reminds me of one of my favorite songs, "Knocking on Heavens Door". So appropriate too, for these especially troubling times we are living in. Very nicely written.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Beautiful
Love this
I really do

Posted 1 Month Ago


knocking at your door, well somebody did,and knocked it down,

Posted 1 Month Ago


Very E.A. Poe like and a fitting start for the month of Halloween. It is time to dust off the haunts of Halloween poems of the past. Bravo! my friend Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 1 Month Ago



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Adam M. Snow
Adam M. Snow

El Mirage, AZ



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"The writer’s mind, can surpass even the most intellectual minds." –Adam M. Snow I keep my work clean, I write to inspire others. Some people would even call me a philosopher, but w.. more..

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