Dark Love

I hold a dark love for thee,
I love you and you love me
There isn't anything I wouldn't do,
To hold your hand and see you through
No matter how far apart or how near I'll be,
The love I hold will stand true, you'll see.

Reviews

[Twilight]

Simple, yet honest and direct. Thankyou, for sharing these thoughts! Also, it does have a warm and romantic feel to it. I could almost feel the warmth of love, Stacy! Indeed, the title seems kind of strange. I mean, what is "dark", about the wonderful love which you describe?


Julian

I like this. The rhyme is pretty good. I wished it was a little longer. It seems you could add more to it. I know I wanted to read more! Great poem!