Lost In Travelling...

Edited version...

Every tree has a story
To tell me,
Every drop has a visual 
To show me,
Every bird have a song
To sing,
Every animal have some magic
That I wanna see,
Every road have some scars
Of struggle that I wanna cherish,
Every heart beat of mine says
You can,
Every second I breathe says
Am leaving a life,
Every day, every sunrise says
Waiting for you in a brand new place,
Every night I say tomorrow is
A new day for travelling,
Every pic I click shows my life..

Author's Note

Might be good than previous one....running out of words...hope to see your comments..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my good friend. Every deed or action. We shall pay for. I liked your wisdom and thoughts shared. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

Thank you John.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Surya.

[Abhishek Asthana]

its an emotional write... so deep... thanks for sharing

[Surya]

Thank you Abhishek....:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

mr.wonderman!
you've done wonders!

[Surya]

Ohh!!!, smiling now..with happiness..
Thanks a lot Wajiha...
You encouraged me a lot..Thank you Dear for each and every word...:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

heyy....my pleasure...
i will encourage you always and please don't say thank you....best friends?

[Surya]

Yeah we are...no thank you, haha..:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

hehehe...cool!

[Zephyr]

Loved the poem and the repetition is catchy.
Esp the last line. Grammatical errors are there.
The concept is fresh and keep writing traveler:)

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you Naat, yeah sure..and I will correct them...:)

[Anjali]

Well, you certainly have used some incredible words up there in that poem. It gave us all a little glance of traveling. Brilliant write!

[Surya]

Travelling, A way of life for me...Thank you Anjali for your words and visit...Am glad you enjoyed..:)

[Anjali]

I really enjoyed! You're welcome, again.

[Mr.Writer]

Wow, very exotic, beautiful and engaging!! :)
Your writing style amazes me Surya!
I feel like there might be some grammar probs still lol.
"Every tree have a story"
Maybe it should be
Every tree has a story"
Just some feedback :)

[Surya]

Yeah, Thank you Shaan, Will Change it effective immediately, Keep visiting keep correcting.Thank's again...:)

[John F Carver]

I'm hooked. You write well. I saw it. I felt it. I commiserated. Thanks for the emotions.

[Surya]

Ohh!, it makes my day, Thanks alot keep visiting...:)

[wordman]

your soul is searching for it`s previous home

[Surya]

L'll of that sort....well, Thank you for your visit..:)

[Asmae]

i love travelling too *^*

[Surya]

Haha.. , i love it too...

[CAPOLAVORO]

I love your poem despite imperfections.
I love knowing you love you in all sections
Can I say I love your wallet too to make me your travelee..

Haha just kidding. This is nice. Yeah, you could make it better though. Try and edit it as you keep on finding more words. Well done.

[Surya]

Haha, yeah you can be my companion and you can love my wallet....
Actually i just wanted to write this piece as a person who is not a writer but wanna show his love, that's it....Thank you for your review and your love to my wallet...hahaha..

[CAPOLAVORO]

haha just a real thought.. no wallet no travel hehe

[Surya]

I know, just kidding...hahaha..