Alone But Alive...

Just words...

Feeling alone in feary world,
Day consumes me, 
Drops occupy Black.

A tear drop with your
Image shines like a moon
In this scary night,
But drop fades away..

Words killing me,
Blood flowing as ink
On my days as sheets,
My life a paint on oily canvas...

I want your smile for 
Hours and hours
Where you lying in my heart,
But now you are away...

Realised, regretted And
Am moving away
From my loss 
At cost of hearts and drops..

Reviews

[Farhan Shaikh]

Some superb line made the whole poem very nice..i enjoyed

[Surya]

Haha, Thank you so much Farhan...am glad you enjoyed...:)

[Zephyr]

"At cost of hearts and drops.."- These lines are great...
A touching poem, Surya...
Keep writing!

[Surya]

Thank you so much Naat, am glad you liked it...:)

[Nora]

It's pretty good , and so deep 😊

[Surya]

Thank you so much Nourhan...:)

[Nora]

Welcome 😊😊

[Wajiha Nayeem]

its a beautiful poem and yes, though it's just poetry....i would say my dear buddy that even if we are alone there is someone beside standing and supporting you and if u really meant these words then i am with you surya..anytime..anywhere and forever...

[Surya]

Anytime, anywhere,.....Thanks is very less for you even though Thanks a ton.....:)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

my pleasure mr.wonderman!

[Surya]

It's my plsr:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Very deep and thoughtful. I really liked it. It was my type of poetry. 😀

[Surya]

Seems like I joined your club, haha, Thank you Saher...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Mr.Writer]

Woah, it's a deep poem Surya!
The images that you tried to make of the loss and blood, was pretty clear and was imagined...
Amazing job!

[Surya]

Thank you Shaann,...:)

[Priyanshi]

Really, it's an appreciating poem.... when we love someone, and he/ she ,moves away from us it hurts too much. Though we live, but our soul dies..... don't feel like to live.
Every word in your poem is beautiful, Surya.

[Surya]

Thank you So much Priyanshi...:)

[Priyanshi]

Pleasure is mine.