Raging Eagle..

Closed wings, a hidden plumage,

Like a broken beak of raging eagle,

Suffering pain, claws had no flaws

but of no use...State of mind stubborns.

Perception and misconception

towards visualising things led to damage,

Anyhow, Life is a lesson worth experiencing,

Though suffering is a choice..

I say Face it..

Suffering Eagle drawn to tears

Shedding like erupting volcano,

But suffered and raised from

Burning core of earth to survive...

This survival is not an act of living

It's a rebirth of raging eagle 

turning into king of air

waiting for queen to share his throne..

Finally a day did come where I 

seen my eagle hunting....

 

Reviews

[Giulia King]

Beautiful poem, Surya! Enjoyed reading it :)

[Surya]

Thank you My friend for your warm visit and words, am glad you enjoyed it...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

our country's symbol...and right now he is closing his wings to protect from what our country is becoming---such chaos now the feathers are molting.
strong poem, Surya....glad to see one in English---
i really like your writing when i can translate.
j.

[Surya]

Haha..well, Thank you J for your kind visit and words...am glad to know you liked it...:)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Awesome poem Surya a message coming out of this a very good work..

[Surya]

It seems so..haha..thank you Farhan...:)

[Psychotic Lily]

Wow! To me it explains how we face trials in life. It's wonderfully written

[Surya]

Thank you lily..glad to know you liked it...:)

[Rassoul]

Amazing work, Surya!
Waiting for more.

[Surya]

Thank you Rassoul...will be adding soon...:)

[Abhishek Asthana]

marvellous work indeed surya, a great imagery has been shown... its powerful write i must say... keep it up... massive work done :)

[Surya]

Thanks a ton Abhishek for your kind visit and words....:)

[Mr.Writer]

This was an epic poem on an eagle and humans eye Surya!
Filled with emotions, imagery which made it engaging!
Keep it up

[Surya]

Thank you Shaan...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem shows strength in your words....I liked the symbolism of eagle here....

[Surya]

Thank you Saher, glad you liked it...:)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[Priyanshi]

Though passing through obstacles in life and facing them with bravery is something inspirational.....Life is all about facing various problems and go on in life...
Very well, you portray your emotions in the poems and I really ,liked it.

[Surya]

Haha...sometimes I do...Thank you Priyanshi..:)

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure, friend.

[pia]

This was so powerful.
We all have inner spirit animals
In this case the eagle represents greatness and leadership.
But sometime even the most powerful can sometimes feel weak.
but we can all overcome that

[pia]

Surya you are a great writer !!

[Surya]

You made my day.......
Thanqq ssooo much for such generous review am glad to see them...Thank uou so much Pia..:)