08-01-15

08-01-15

A Poem by StimulateyourCreativity
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The smell of her kiss just left my lips,
I can't be stressed with her,
As soon as were apart,
I obsess for her,

© 2015 StimulateyourCreativity



Author's Note

StimulateyourCreativity
I have never smoked a cigarette but tried to compare it to this feeling. Just tried to capture the feeling of wanting to be with a girl even though I had just left her house. She is my addiction.

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damn, i feel this one so hard. Short but says so much more and reading this gave me a pain in my chest because I know that feeling oh so well. It's beautiful really, and amazing.. but strangly painful..? To want and yearn for another human like that. haha It's sick, don't you just love it? Awesome little piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it!!! :)



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I like it because from a scientific stand point, love is an addiction. It's a chemical imbalance in the brain that gives one a similar feeling as that of taking a drag of a cigarette. It's a short but powerful piece. Well done.


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!!
Very nice poem!!
Keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Thank you!!
There's nothing like being addicted to a person. Amazing yet tragic in a way. Thank you for sharing :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed
The kiss. Lead us to tempting and dangerous ground. I like the way you described the kiss. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Thanks! I appreciate it Coyote
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
damn, i feel this one so hard. Short but says so much more and reading this gave me a pain in my chest because I know that feeling oh so well. It's beautiful really, and amazing.. but strangly painful..? To want and yearn for another human like that. haha It's sick, don't you just love it? Awesome little piece.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, I appreciate it!!! :)
I remember driving away from my then boy friends, now husbands house and feeling empty like i was leaving my soul with him. I feel this. Simple and profound

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Thats a great way to describe the feeling. Thank you!
love the first line and understand the need...would read better if you used we're in the third line...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Yeah ooops :| Thank you though!!
Will her flavor be different, the next time you'll see her? Lovely words dear author.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

It only gets better, thanks :)
I've been there the obsession is insanity. Getting them out your system is excruciating. Great piece

Posted 2 Years Ago


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StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Very crazy, thank you!!!
Sultrysoul

2 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Interesting idea, the comparison of obsession verses addiction. I really like this concept but there just isn't enough of this good thing, I would love to see you build on this and explore deeper into your emotions. Thank you for inviting me to read this, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

StimulateyourCreativity

2 Years Ago

Thank you, I will be doing a longer version for sure. Please read and review my writing, you are alw.. read more

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