The Snow

Falling at a terminal velocity

From the ether we fall at a speed that is  

Slow

What is my purpose, my destiny

Inevitable fate befalls the

Snow

Colliding with the other frosty white souls

Scattered across the ground sparkling like bright white

Gold

We're born in a season that is dead

How can something so white and pure be 

Cold

Like vampires the sun is our infirmity

Dawn approaches illuminating hues of

Wry

The epiphany before my death 

Is everything is impermanent 

Why

Reviews

[Elvin Ecarma Ruiz]

It is visually and figuratively nice! Bravo!

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you so much Elvin!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This takes a different path altogether...
again the way the lines counter act...
the reasoning and the implementation...

[Trevor Barnett]

Thanks for the review Glen, much appreciated!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome....

[A. Amos]

Wonderful piece of writing and I'm sure many will relate to your work

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you very much Amos, and hopefully they will!

[Raymond Federle]

Wonderful rhyme and creativity! Well done my friend! :)

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you for the wonderful comment, and I'm glad you liked it!

[MsJewel]

Your creativity shines in this well written poem. Your one word lines at the end of the verse are very effective. Great writing my friend.

:) Julie

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you for the nice review, and I'm glad you liked the one word lines! Something new I tried lol!

[Sami Khalil]

"We're born in a season that is dead

How can something so white and pure be

Cold"

A marvelous write along with the deeper questions...Bravo.............

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you very much Sami! I'm glad you liked it.

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)....................

[Rehan Roy]

'What is my purpose, my destiny Inevitable fate befalls...Is everything impermanent why' A wonderful write.

[Trevor Barnett]

Thank you, your comment is much appreciated!