Brown Hair And Blue Eyes

And there she was with the prettiest purple dress.

And there she was with her brown hair in a mess.

I won't forget our first dance.

I won't forget our kiss.

I won't forget how we loved at first,

because what we do is different at its birth.

What I'm trying to say is that we acted different,

so nervous at times and acting indifferent.

Like we were ashamed of our lives and afraid of what to say.

But now we are relaxed and okay!

Your brown hair and blue eyes.

They forgive me of my lies.

I am no longer such a thief,

I now never have to grief.

You're hand coaxes my heart,

breast upon yours.

Rest with me, let us see.

How the rest shall be.

And there you are with that familiar grin.

And there you are without a trace of sin.

An angel in the grace.

An angel in the face.

What can I say!

I will give it all away!

What I'm trying to say is not different.

WE're were better off not as friends.

Like holding hands and hugs.

All this happiness keeps me hooked like drugs!

Your brown hair and blue eyes.

They forgive me of my lies.

I am no longer such a thief,

I now never have to grief.

You're hand coaxes my heart,

breast upon yours.

Rest with me, let us see.

How the rest shall be.

Crushing it all and washing the rest away. 

Let it go and let's live and pray.

Dusk to dawn, it'll be okay.

Love is mine, and that's all I need.

Reviews

[WhimsicalAutomatonophob..]

This is fantastical, and I can guarantee that every girl whose read this wishes she was the girl in the poem who you described so perfectly. I myself am struck with envy that I cannot write poetry the way you seem to be able to. I can write stories, but alas, the art of poetry evades me.

[TheLastEclipse]

Well thank you very much :)
I write everything I can. I may not be excellent at it but I love the arts. All of them. even martial arts :D But back on subject, I feel as if when I write poems that I focus more on a lyrical sense of writing instead of anything else; therefore, I lose my touch in story writing but I love writing stories also... It's sad...

[WhimsicalAutomatonophobicHippopotamus]

This poem proves that you never lost that touch, it just grew into something new and different and utterly amazing.

[Craba]

pretty amazing write

[TheLastEclipse]

why thank you. :)

[SouthernBelle]

This is amazing i really it. I could paint a picture in my mind as I read it. good job keep it up (:

[mandy]

i won't forget how we loved at first,,that is so true, in an ongoing relationship, the dynamics do change. and sometimes we find ourselves reacting differently later than we would earlier to the same things. we find what is truly important. i like the ending very much too. good write.

[C.C. Marx]

how sweet! i love a good romantic poem now and a then