What others see, what I see, what you see

What others see, what I see, what you see

A Poem by Tomoe Tellez
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What matters is how we see life

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You see my mother

I know a warrior

She never gives up

Always so strong

 

You see my father

I know a hero

He fights with honor

Wish I could mirror

 

You see my brother

I know a soldier

Searching for the truth

Hates how injustices rule

 

You see my grandmother

I know a queen

With kindness she reigns

And loves all the children

 

You see my grandfather

I know a king

Who protects his family

From any danger

 

You see a girl

I know I am a writer

What others see
Doesn't matter

 

As long as you believe

You will have magic


© 2015 Tomoe Tellez



Author's Note

Tomoe Tellez
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I really love this. It is something I think others can connect with and I love this idea you are looking at with this poem. The idea where you talk about how others view people and then how you view people. This poem really made me think about that in my own life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

I'm glad it did! :D Thank you for your kind words.



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Lovely poem! We all idolize someone or the other in our own family, fir they are people we have grown up seeing and countless times they have inspired us to be a better version of ourselves.
Beautiful! Loved the sweet write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool poem loved the one before last verse , im baaaaaack 😏

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the compliment!
Empowerment, and a beautiful vision towards life, Alondra. Loved reading this. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Life isn't perfect, but the way we see it, changes everything. Thanks for reading it, I'm glad you l.. read more
Now this is something i like.
No big words,
just comparing viewpoints with your own. awesome work.
100 points

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much :D!
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

no problem :)
Reminds me of Once Upon a Time, a family of gallant heroes with a writer for a daughter. Though not in the spotlight, your role is just as vital.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Hey, thanks for the nice words and for reading.
I really love this. It is something I think others can connect with and I love this idea you are looking at with this poem. The idea where you talk about how others view people and then how you view people. This poem really made me think about that in my own life.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

I'm glad it did! :D Thank you for your kind words.
Very evocative and full of emotion. Family is everything.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much!
An interesting sequence... with a pow! ending... very nice!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your words! :)
I love how proud you showed us of those closest to you in a beautifully written poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Yeah, a had been planning to write my feelings about them from a long time ago, I just hadn't found .. read more
Insight

2 Years Ago

You are mostly welcome.
I enjoyed the story of the important people in your life. I tell people. Never rate another life. Don't know their journey. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Thank you a lot for reading! :D
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on September 1, 2015
Last Updated on September 2, 2015
Tags: family, love, hero, warrior, king, queen, soldier

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Tomoe Tellez
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I am a since I learned how to write. No kidding, my mother has home videos where I´m talking about the stories I use to write for my little brothers at the age of seven. I’ve always writt.. more..

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