Life changes

Life changes

A Poem by Tomoe Tellez
"

Life is never the same always

"
I am loosing my faith

  I can't find any hope

    Life has brought me an ache

      With which I cannot cope

         I never needed to be strong

           In my life, there was nothing wrong

             For what I once had 

               I am grateful

                 But now that it's gone

                   It's too painful!




© 2015 Tomoe Tellez



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Tomoe Tellez
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There is a sadness in the realization of how fleeting the structures of our lives are. Your wording conveys what it needs perfectly - at least in my book.

I very much like the flow in this.

I am curious as to why the color difference? It's not something you usually do.
Well done in any case :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

Well, I had done it based on the main subject of the line, like the one with wrong had red, grateful.. read more



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AE
I like the format. It's a concrete visual representation of how life has been going down hill. The poem is innocent, honest, bare, and simple. I like it, good job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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mou
AFTER THE DARKEST NIGHT,PURE DAWN WILL ARISE....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The way you portrayed the poem makes sadness so clear, it's like a diagram going downwards.
Good job.

Posted 1 Year Ago


simple and lovely
great piece
and relatable

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nice effect with the slant thingy, it's quite amusing and it fits kind of the theme of going downhill, I guess~ Solid poem, my friend~

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot, that is what I was aiming for :D.
Honest tone to the words. When we lose too much. Hard to grasp. I understand the honest ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Coyote for your compliment.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
Slanted writing. For each perspective there is a another. The Pisan tower only leans to the right from this side.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot for reading!
I really liked it!!
Keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the encouragement.
poking fun at itself in the end throws the feelings from sad to something lighter. i like the lighter feeling taking over.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tomoe Tellez

1 Year Ago

Thanks a lot! :D

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Added on November 23, 2015
Last Updated on December 5, 2015
Tags: life, faith, ache, pain

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Tomoe Tellez
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I am a since I learned how to write. No kidding, my mother has home videos where I´m talking about the stories I use to write for my little brothers at the age of seven. I’ve always writt.. more..

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