The Alone Girl

The Alone Girl

A Poem by Antoñyo
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3-sentence contest / No line over 7 words

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She heard or was told

some drink for fun, others to forget

She tried both…nothing ever changed

© 2016 Antoñyo


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Such power in so few words. Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Antoñyo

7 Years Ago

Thanks, because there's a deepness I wanted to be felt. I appreciate your time.
MelissaAndres

7 Years Ago

You're welcome!
You are so good at these contests! This is so powerful ...and done so succinctly. The image is perfect.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Antoñyo

7 Years Ago

Ah, thanks, but so are you, and to encourage or push others is the most important thing.
It conveys the hopelessness so well. A great message here, Antonyo. Appreciated so much...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Antoñyo

7 Years Ago

Hey, thank you for reading, my friend

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 Added on May 3, 2016
Last Updated on May 3, 2016
Tags: alone, girl, change

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Antoñyo
Antoñyo

City of Angels and Rams, CA



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