Summer Slips Away

Short poem

Autumn oh Autumn
Sneaking in on a whisper
Summer slips away

Reviews

[Audrey M.]

Summer tends to slip away fast like sand between your fingers. Nice little poem, Trace.
Love Autumn!

[Trace]

A little Haiku to welcome autumn
I guess i should do one for each season

Thanks for the reading and comments.

Trace

[B. Boileau]

Haiku personified. I do sometimes miss seasons. Although there is change in Vegas. It's only hot, or less hot.

bill

[Trace]

oh, it can get dam cold there too. but I know what you mean,
Thanks for the read and comments.

Trace

[Neville]

Short indeed but nevertheless delightful. Another good un, N

[Trace]

Thank you for your great comments.

Trace

[Lydia Shutter]

I liked this very much, Trace. Summer never quite leaves here in South Florida, but the extreme heat and humidity do slip away a bit. Lydi**

[Trace]

Summer has been hanging on here but I am sure it won't last.

Thank you for your wonderful compliments and comments.

Trace

[Diana]

And we don't know how it happened it snuck up so quietly. I'm reminded of Carl Sandberg's poem about fog (how it sneaks in on cat feet). Short and sweet..

[Trace]

Thank you for your wonderful comments.

Nice to see you.

Trace

[Roland Petrov]

Autumn sneaks, summer slips. This is very nice. I would encourage you to do haiku more often! Seems like you have the knack for it.

[Trace]

Thank you for the wonderful comments and compliments on this poem.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Stunning. Welcome back sweetie!

:) Julie

[Trace]

Thank you my dear friend
Thank you........

Trace

[Pryde Foltz]

Speaking to the season and a person, I think. Loved this Trace:)

[Trace]

We are actually having Autumn here in the Rockies this year.
No snow in the valley yet but the mountains got a little dusting of the white stuff.

Thanks for the wonderful compliments.

Trace

[Sami Khalil]

Short but impact-full. Excellent, sir...:)......................

[Trace]

A rare haiku from me. So glad you liked it.

Trace.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......

[Louise.xx]

Very nice I especially love that middle line. Beautiful Haiku xx

[Trace]

Don't do haiku very often but I am just getting my feet wet again here.

Thank you for your wonderful compliments.

Trace

[Trace]

Thank you so very much.
Just getting my feet wet in the autumn breezes.

Trace