8

8

A Poem by Treo LeGigeo
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There once was a little number eight...

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There once was a little number eight,
Which took on itself to negate,
Freedom, right,
Before they finally saw the light,
It gets better now, state by state.

© 2013 Treo LeGigeo


Author's Note

Treo LeGigeo
Yes, this is about Proposition 8.

The last line is a reference to It Gets Better.

For a limerick contest.

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i really like this! it's a cute and well written little poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like it. You get straight to the point.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice piece about equality and a good relation to the it gets better campaign too. Well written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like it. It is short and to the point.

Posted 6 Years Ago


To infinity ∞, and beyond!

Posted 6 Years Ago


i like it, nicely done and stated!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Neat!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I am all for Proposition 8 and I love that someone (you) could right something so beautiful about it in such as beautiful way.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Treo LeGigeo

6 Years Ago

I'm guessing you mean against prop 8 (since that was the one that defined marriage as only between a.. read more
Soul Singer

6 Years Ago

Oh lmao i have no idea why i said that "Im all for your poem on proposition 8" oops lol
Quite the limerick .Sorry i havent talked to you in a while

Posted 6 Years Ago


Treo LeGigeo

6 Years Ago

Oh hey :-) It has been a while. Thanks for the review. I'll be sure to check out some of your new st.. read more
Tate Morgan

6 Years Ago

nice to hear from you

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Added on September 28, 2012
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Treo LeGigeo
Treo LeGigeo

Sydney, NSW, Australia



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I'm from Australia, so some people may find that I spell things differently. I love writing and have had a couple of publications of short stories and novellas under a pseudonym. I started .. more..

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