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what i view

at this moment in this perspective, all you see is nothing. the nothing i see is everything, empty places of time. effortless previews, lyricless depth, people wihout forward faces. nothing you will always see. everything i will always see. failed efforts, lazy follow ups, passionless attempts. i see it all and choose and chose until i have chosen it all. dissmissed by common luxury. now ive seen all reaction and possible diction with responded contradiction nothing ive seen is worth seeing.Moments of rain caught on wind driven leaves, wishing they woukd never land.like the happening of change only embraced by the few that gain advantage.to me the informed geniuine i view the curent past waiting for the return.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Very well written. I like all its aspects...:)..............

[Poeticme]

This poem hold the weight of so many realities; very well penned my friend, thanks for sharing this powerful write.

Moments of rain caught on wind driven leaves, wishing they would never land.....Very poetic..Keep it up☺

Poeticme

[Steven]

thanks for the review even though I don't punctuate very well.