Prolouge

Tabitha

         I moved here to Kingston Michigan with my mother, step-dad, and 2 sisters. We left our home in Nashville Tennessee in order to escape my crazy older brother and phyco father.

         My brother and biological father have been abusing me for the past 13 years of my life. Just four years ago we escaped them and I aged to my current age of 16, almost 17. Just a month ago my brother found me and threatend to kill me of I didn't do what he told me to do. I rebeled and he grabbed a knife from the kitchen and tried to stab me in the cheast. He missed and hit me in the top of the arm.

         We moved to Michigan to escape them and even told our friends and family that we can't tell them where we are, eaither Dad or Thomas would find us and finish the job that they started.

         I look back at the time we moved and the time that we moved here and my thoughts were that I was going to hate it. I kept thinking this until I started to pack my things into the room and Griffin was there. He was the one that changed my world and changed my entire prespective of my new life.

         He was my one true friend and the only one that was kind to me, besides my best friend from Tennessee, Jake, and my Step-Dad,Mark, who was like the family that I never had, at least that's what I thought until IT happened.

Welcome to my Life

Author's Note

This is basically Tabitha telling of her past and of what she thought of the time she moved to Michigan. Ignore grammer and Spelling.

Reviews

[Cynthia]

Its a really nice setting and plot, I love the way you tell the story, telling the past. I sure wil read on, keep the request coming :)
Also, just one suggestion, change the '1' to 'one, I don't know if its me problem or not, but its weird to have a number in a story, I think using 'one' will be better. Hope it helps

[compositionc]

You're doin' a lot of telling, and no showing. The backstory could have waited, but it's nice to know what's going on.

[halflives]

Ooh, well done. I'm interested to see what happens.

[Daydreamer54]

phyco-psycho
1 best friend-one
i don't think it;'s good to start off with dropping information on us. let us wonder about her past first. OMG, how could her own flesh and bl;ood brother try to kill her? unless he 's on drugs...I liked how you ended it though. ^^

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful start! It has me interested already:)

[~Lizzy♬]

Nice opening. :)

~Lizzard~